this was cute and hot.i liked it! lol,typical axel to b turned on by that.xD lol,well,great job!

I no i probably reviwd thos when you first posted it but being back on here, i couldn't help but read it again. Lovin it as usual. cya

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I really liked this! :) You depicted the relationship depicted between Axel and Roxas so well.

Oh my dear! I /finally/ get around to checking out your page (and shame on me for taking so long) and I find a long, lovely rant on Axel and Roxas's relationship that I wholeheartedly agree with (is shot for the horrible heart pun) /and/ wonderful fics. I am a happy little person, that I am. :)

"“Because I’m hot, genius, and damn me if I’m gonna stay here without getting something to cool me down,” Axel grinned, rolling his eyes at his shorter friend and pushing himself off the wall they were sat on." *cries* They're in-character! You're not raping their personalities or canon up the arse without lube to make it work! Not that I'd expected you would, mind you, but I still love you! ;)

And Roxas initiated the kiss! Kudos and my undying affection - I am /so/ sick of the stereotype that Roxas lets Axel molest him. He weilds two Keyblades, he could Axel's ass in a hot minute if the redhead stepped out of line like that.

And you've managed to forever pervert ice cream. XD I'm off to peruse your other works. *insert manic laughter here* =3

This is adorable, and well-written. (: *favs*

Whoa-ho, I would never look at a sea-salt ice cream with a straight face ever again...

-snickers-

-Muffinizer's Birthday in: 3 Days

awws! that was soo cute! hehe.. ice cream... i love Axel!

mwuh hah hah hah, that was just plain evil! how the hell am i meant to play that game now with out laughing when they find the ice cream? :P good job!

Awesome oneshot!I really liked reading it.
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xD neither would i, neither would i.

loved it :D

That was So cool! Please write more!! XD ^_^ I love'd it!!