Great story. Lovely use of repetitive structure, and a brilliant line to end it with.

Very Very - Gosh the word has gone. In the least, it is in touch with everything but himself. Well, not exactly, but - I'm rambling and not making sense. It is good. Thank you.

- Miss.

A very nice, dreamy piece. I take it they're arguing on some sort of astral level, and that what Severus "tried" at the end was to return to life.

Very sweet and sad.