Love the imagined future, it fits in well with what we know of the Silver Millenium and how it was, mostly. Besides the whole Tyrant Serenity thing. I'm really looking forward to how Ranma and Ryouga will fulfill Pluto's wishes, will they change Usagi in the past, maybe? Keep up the good work!

This is kinda a hard sell, but I heart the alternate take of the future dystopia of SM. So anyway, congrats for posting more, even if there hasn't been deelopment, I have faith in you guys!

With that said, I'm not sure about the time return part, how does this further the plot? Is it part of Pluto's plot? A warning? Part of a sawtooth loop? Call me narrow-minded, but I don't get it. On the other hand, the reversal with R+R hosting R+R now makes for awesome. If you're keeping the 80's setting of Ranma, but what if Rena hacks up a locator or something for Ryogua?

Lastly, chibi-Pluto was a hoot.

truly great storry please update soon

This is kinda wierd. I like wierd stuff. Therefore, I like this story. I would definitely continue reading if more chapters were posted.

Yeah, this is one of the most epic ideas' I've ever heard of too. An evil Serenity ruling the effing galaxy? Insane man, totally insane!

Well, this chapter was just as much fun as I expected it to be. I will also admit I had no idea you would head back down the time stream a ways. Its a nice way to avoid the fallout with serenity. I think of particular fun will be our future girl's reactions to the curses. I was actually a little sad we didn't get to see those yet but I suppose you decided to wait and unveil that later.

Fantastic chapter. I'm excited to see more of this story finally!

This is wonderful, I've been waiting for more of this story. I'm just printing it out to read now but I'll comment more later.

Intriguing method for a crossover. Serenity the White Queen reminds me of a quote from Lord of the Rings - "In place of a Dark Lord you would have a queen! Not dark, but beautiful and terrible as the dawn! Treacherous as the sea! Stronger than the foundations of the Earth! All shall love me and despair!"

Oh my.
Now back in the present?
Interesting. And this is still one of my fav fics, despite the hugely long no update spree.
Get your inspiration back asap!
I wanna see the next chappie in a couple of months!

Such an awesome story. Just found it yesterday... and when I saw that it was co-written between you two... that's really what got me to read it.

Looking forward to more, and the update of 'her war'.

Keep up the good work!

Love the story, please continue.

Yeah, it's back.

Will Ranma find out then when splashed that her cloths are replaced with the cloths she wears in the future as Raya?
It would be funny if she finds this out when doing what Kasumi asked her to do, especialy if it also locks her.

So, the Naban Mirror will be repaired?
Atleast we can espect the usaly chaos to happen.

Anyway, till the next time (hope way sooner).

Thanks for posting what you had, even if you’ll never continue this.

I guess Rena/Raya acceptance of being showed to a corner of the mind is a result of their brainwashed upbringing. In fact it seems the inner girls are becoming less accepting as time goes by, perhaps a result of their slowly shifting world view – making it a reversal of the “soul merge” cliché with them growing apart instead of together.

Serena seems to have forgotten that Setsuna is a master chess player capable of predicting her opponents move far in advanced. I suspect that Serena in her “cleverness” is playing Setsuna’s tune… heh. What are the odds on Ryouga being a candidate for “the guardian of time”, now there’s a thought.

I can see potential for past/future confusion with R&R getting to know the pre-brainwashed Scouts. Hmm. Perhaps with the “past Setsuna trying to destroy them” cliché thrown in for good measure :D

Now on the hair thing. Is Serenity/etc. hair also like that? I'd expect people would want to emulate her and the other shenshi... unless that's how youth distance themselves from the older gen. R&R might change that if their candidate status becomes common knowledge, they might also find themselves every guy/girls(?) dream catch, perhaps land them fiancée trouble in both time periods along with new enemies crawling out of the woodwork to have a swipe at two weak young girls. The more things change the more they stay the same and all that :)

Hoping for more.

You have to be kidding me! This ** is awesome! I can't believe I have never read Sailor moon FFN until now and I can't believe I haven't realized that Sailormoon is like the perfect Harem setup. If you have a good author, and a reaslistic plot, you have a the combo to one of the most erotic comedies I can imagine. Thank's for letting me know! I am starting on one right, well maybe not right away, but I'll think of something!

Cheers mate,

zero destroyer