 tanith-4486 2008-02-10 . chapter 10cool |
 Coronadofwb 2007-07-10 . chapter 7 Oh! I really like the “Daughter implies that she either has your DNA or your love" bit. Very true :D I admit, I'd be scared like Cathy too seeing Lancer react that way :P
“Dani, you’re sagging. Go human.” XD I like the suspense here. It's getting me to wonder like it is everyone else, especially for Cathy. “'Why didn’t you phone then?' Could have saved us a lot of trouble today." Indeed :P “'And this isn’t like Vlad how?' Sounds loopy enough to me..." HAHA! I'll say. Lancer won the argument? Well I totally missed something then ;p “Is it going to be the guy with anger issues or the ghost with a cell phone and a clone?” Heheh, they're in trouble now XP “'Fruitloop,' muttered Danny." XD Danny ftw! Heheh! Da-Phantom PX "Fruitloop’s too nice a term for him." So it would seem =P Green t-shirt and khakis? o.o O. "Wait, Danny, Dani...Vlad isn’t very original, is he?" Nope, and that's just how we love him. "Now I’ve got to worry about new powers all over again. Great." Hey, that is a pretty cool power b: Bet you want it Kali *pokes* “'We’ll have to test you,' said Danny. 'See what sorts of things you’re limited to, distances, control, length of time, weight...'” Since when does Danny know to do all of that to test new powers? xD jk |
 Coronadofwb 2007-07-01 . chapter 5 I've been having serious Kali fanfic withdrawel! T_T Why can't there be 48 hours in a day? XP And what in the world are you talking about in the disclaimers? You like to confuse me don't you? x(
I like the names given for the ghosts in the class xp And I love the one class a week idea! I could totally deal with that lol. Ah, cool! Dani's in the class. This'll be so much fun. I can see it now. "well, ghosts who don’t have somewhere to live are Against The Rules". Wow, that really sucks. Poor Dani. With her condition she sounds a lot like me xD That's very kind of Lancer to will fully take her with him to be taken care of.
And I love how Cathy is willing to take care of Dani while Lancer goes off, and I love her tone as well. "The girl had gone from confused to scared and defensive to cautiously accepting almost instantly." XP What a shock. Very interesting about Dani, and I had almost forgotten she was two years older in this story. I really did like how Lancer and Cathy took her in and cared for her like that, just like a family.
Sorry for not have getting to your stories in so long T-T I've hit a humungous crisis in my life and now I have a serious medical emergency to deal with. wtf? Anyways, I'll be sure to get to your fics more often from now on. Love ya and miss ya! |
 this account iz be dead 2007-04-29 . chapter 1hellz yeah.
except, um, i've missed a few episodes,
&& i don't know who this "spirit" fellow is.
[favs]
♥ lola |
 YumeTakato 2007-04-28 . chapter 10Awes... that was nice. X3 See ya next time! |
 wfea 2007-04-27 . chapter 10Um, this review may have already been sent...I'm not sure because my computer decided to act crazy. If so, overlook it. If not...
Yay! Well, not yay because this is the end of this story, but yay because Lancer and Cathy finally hooked up. Oh, and the Danny/Sam in this chapter was cute. Even though most of the Danny/Sam was in the last chapter and this chapter was just where they told everyone the good news, I liked it and thought it was cute! Put aside the fact that I've just watched/am watching the end of again Phantom Planet, I'm hyped up tonight!
Um, I should probably go now... |
 Snickerer 2007-04-27 . chapter 10William Tell Overture. XD
Hee. There's something just adorable about the Fenton parents being considered a safe haven. And you have to admit, as long as they're pointed in the right direction, they /are/ kinda cuddly. :)
"It's about time!" XD Good lord, you know it was bad when /Vlad's/ smiling too.
Speaking of whom, this actually sounds like it works. I like the 'wasting my talents' bit especially. :)
Heh. Ellipsis /before/ the 'Oh,' maybe ? ^^
Heh. And yeah, the reasoning for Dani makes sense.
And the whole flashback sequence is still /great/. ^_^
Deja vu. */grins/*
And I /still/ thought the same as Lancer with the luggage. XD
Heh. Yeah, can understand that, net stuff especially. Will 'see' you when possible, then. ^^
And /not/ gonna complain about possibility of GoM. :) |
 egyptianqueen777 2007-04-26 . chapter 10yes! i knew it! i'm not really into mushy love junk, but ok. fair ending i suppose. i'm going to read the next one as soon as you rewrite it. |
 HiddenAuthor 2007-04-25 . chapter 10Once again, glorious, Esme. I wish you all the best. BUT YOU BETTER NOT LOSE TOUCH!
Ehem...that is...I hope we can keep up a discussion, maybe through DA. You have a good author-ness to you, so we must speak story-isms. See ya around! :D |
 Pterodactyl 2007-04-25 . chapter 10Great chapter. Sorry that I haven't been leaving reviews but the chapters them selves weren't all that different from the original.
The flash backs of Lancer's life were wonderfully done.
Have a great summer. If it isn't a problem, could you please let me read your Original fiction?
Just out of curiosity, (cats named Maddie beware) have you gotten a chance to read The Scifi story? If not that's okay. I am looking forward to any response to it.
RFYS
Pterodactyl |
 Snickerer 2007-04-20 . chapter 9Still like the tie clip. *grins* Though I think the Phones might be conspicuous against rather than on his head.
And the callsigns. XD "Fruitloop at Learning Central" and "Clueless Two indeed. *cackles merrily*
And you /have/ to love the absently resigned tone to the 'whatever he's trying to pull this time.' XD
Hee. Like the little Sam-Cathy conversation, especially Sam's introduction. ^-^
"Basic Fallback Plan - If All Else Fails, Attack" *cacklecacklethud* Worryingly enough, that's a pretty darn good summary!
And I /like/ Sam's idea. *grins*
Jazmine?
And Vlad's internal monologue works pretty well. ^-^
...and for some reason the bunnies substituted 'stop being a pain in the-' for 'bad' when I tried to read that. XD
/Very/ nice with the startlement and the suspicion on the 'heroic' halfas' part. Wouldn't have fit characterization nearly as well otherwise. And the 'still the calculating bas-' er, 'coward' feels right, too. ^^
Though I think "I'm not going to attack you, and it wouldn't do me any good anyway" might fit there a bit better.
The mentally off-balance is perfect. Because, well, would have to be. ^-^
"I’ve sort of got this fan club..." XD
And Danny's complete lack of concern. *grins*
Rather like the Paulina-Sam conversation, too - and really, Sam /can't/ be any less suspicious. ^-^
"Danny spent the time alternatively snickering and blushing, while desperately trying not to." XD Yeah, I can imagine!
Oh, and the one possibly useful thing I managed to come up with - bunnies have the phrase 'cutting his losses' floating around for Vlad's motivations. |
 wfea 2007-04-19 . chapter 9must type very fast review...class ends in 2 min.
yay! Danny and Sam are dating; for real! Oh, and the cluelessness of Lancer. "Since when have i been cluesless two?" And i was rolling my eyes before sam did abouty the phantom cheer. okay, gotta go... |
 YumeTakato 2007-04-18 . chapter 9X3 That was a great chapter. Author Alert's are down again, FYI. (Happens once a month nowadays, for like... a week DX)
See ya next time! |
 egyptianqueen777 2007-04-17 . chapter 9come on! can't things go out with a bang? nice to see vlad and paulina reformed though, and danny and sam together. keep updating! |
 HiddenAuthor 2007-04-17 . chapter 1Woo! Lots of neat new stuff. (thanks for telling me what it was...hehe...) Still great stuff! The psychology is great, and the awkward Phantom awe is always great to read. Catch ya later! :D |
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