this is a FANTASTIC story! I love both games, I think it would be a cool idea if Sphinx learned how to use a gun and then later find a powerful precursor sword to fight with...

Still pretty good, but its LIGHT Eco, not white eco.

May Thoth, Egyptian god of Knowledge, grant you wisdom

-Novanto

Good first chapter, except the Mummy's real name is spelled Tutankhamun, not Tutenkhamen

Just a question, did Horus betray him during the fight with Set, or after the battle of Set, or was it before then?

Just a quick question to straighten out the confused people out there.

This is awesome!

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Please! Please write more! Your writing is awesomeness!

*claps* I like what your doing here! The "Sphinx and the Cursed Mummy" and Jak games are some of my favorite. It was really darn nice of Jak to heal Sphinx like that. C:

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I don't know how likely you are to continue this after a year's hiatus, but even without knowing the first thing about Sphinx and the Cursed Mummy I like what you're doing.

Great story! Jak was very kind to heal Sphinx with White eco. I never even knew there was white eco.XD Keep updating! I wanna here more to this story!

Ooh, the Sphinx game is beautiful, and I like how you've crossed it with the desert of Spargus. I'm not a fan of crossovers, but this one is done with a lot of care. Your details are clear and not onerous. Daxter's lines are funny and everyone's in character.

There are a few typos in the fic, but overall the spelling and grammar are very nice. The most consistent mistake is it's vs its.

It's- the contraction for "it is"

Its- possessive

Also, I'd recommend you break this long first chapter into a few chapters. If you like long chapters, though, it would be easier for the reader if you put some sort of separation mark between the changes in POV. Although I was able to figure out what was going on, the fic is confusing in parts. This site has a special 'page break' tool you can insert between POV changes. (Most keyboard symbols are screened, unfortunately)

At any rate, I hope you continue your story. It's got a solid start.