Im so confused bella is a singer singing sungs i never hurd or care 2 here cause they seem dum edward left bella or what you didnt even write about reasons for them to build to the kiss and now she a vam angel and ssum other dude left her ur story dosent make a bit of scence i mean cum on is it just me that dosent think this dosent make scence can someone fill in sum info gesh. i would say im srry but im so not can u make sure ur stories make scence pls or dont write at all im so agervated with u. i give ur story a negative 1 now dont take it the wrong way just do better pleas thank u

why did she end up with edward an this chapter confused me

please update soon :D :D

please update i really love this story. i think you should my bella die and bring her back

to life

rite more plz

i luv it!

Luv it!

AWESOME STORY! Update soon! plz? lol :)

That was a great story please write more!XD

awesome chapter write more when you get time

You have a weird(in a good way), and good story. Keep writing! UPDATE!

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!

but i'm just goig to say i don't like edward in general

you should continue ] its awesome ] ]

omg bella is so much better in this story plz finish this soon and how can she have three families and is she gonna get back with edward

Great story! But this last chapter has me so confused. You said Bella has every power, then you said her element was fire and gave her wings. I also don't get how Bella was changed. Perhaps you could write a chapter on Lestat and Bella and their relationship? Overall a great story. By the by, I personally think you should have Bella slowly start to trust Edward. What you did seemed a bit too fast after how she was in the first couple chapters. Good luck and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!