Please update soon

i love this story plz plz update soon

Well, I gotta hand it to you- you eliminate about twenty+ chapters, heavily rewrite it, and I'm loving it even more than I was before. Though Gerald met his end in much the same way as he did in the original version, I feel this new rewritten version really gives him a lot more depth and importance, which I thoroughly enjoyed cause I always did like Gerald's little subplot. And Lizard is far more canon, what with his ruthlessness and (surprisingly!) strategical intelligence. I'm a-liking, so you keep a-writing.

Get back to me quick about what you think of my latest chapter- you're opinion is oh-so-important to me and I miss how much we used to discuss our fics together!

well that was interesting! go layla! shoot them lizards...i loved this chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter. I enjoyed how you portrayed lizard. powerful and direct just like i imagined him. i hope that you UPDATE soon! i'm burning with curiosity.

thanks for the great read,
dogo
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sp

Finally, Lizard. This meeting is better than the old one I'll admit that. Are you gonna pair them together?

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to review. Been busy with things at home, but just to say...I think the rewrite is great! Keep going, you have my full support!

loved the ending...that seriously sucks! I really cant wait till layla becomes a major character again gerald really bugged me. I'm glad he's dead. where's lizard?!?!

UPdate soon,
dogo

The writing style of this version is better but the plot style is pending.

Hey MRQ,

don't worry once you get to college things will go back to normal at your house and you'll be off doing your own thing...hopefully updating your story POTS;) Well there wasn't much action, but like I said before i'm really curious to see where you go with this. Thanks for another great chapter and I hope you update soon.

dogo
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-sp-

Please keep your old charecters, they were great, epsicially Roach. My keyboard is brtoken.

Good chapter. Rather short, but i am curious to know what direction you will go with this. I like how you gave Gerald a choice to do the right or wrong thing. It will make it easier for the reader when he dies...which i'm pretty sure is going to happen.

Thanks for the great read,
dogo
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-SP-

I don't mean to be rude when I say the old version was better hands down. Just continue from that one and save your readers the headache. I just hope that you use the old charecters and situation in this version.

Nice to see that you've updated! I really like this story and would love to see an update really soon! Are you anywhere close to being done?

thanks,
dogo
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-sp-

You should have them do it.

hey, did you desert thisor are you in a slump? if your in a slump i have and idea as to how you could continue it. Wanna hear? too late! first layla goes up to lizards room and sees him there asleep from the pain and is over come with the erg to kiss him so she does and she wakes up and freaks out and she appologises and rus out the door but tutone grabs her and takes her where he and roach are hiding and layla starts crying and roach panics and kisses her to shut her and she faints and when she wakes up shes in a bed in neffertitis house and she explains that there was an attack in retrobution and roach starts avoiding her. sorry if it sucks but this was the best that my helplessly romantic fourteen year old mind could come up with. Please but roach with layla because they would make a great couple!