 ChampagneWishes 2009-09-21 . chapter 1Loved it! Need I say more? |
 me 2007-10-12 . chapter 1 wow I love it! |
 Riker15 2007-03-22 . chapter 1Awesome |
 kokomocalifornia 2007-03-19 . chapter 1excellent work! |
 Von 2007-03-15 . chapter 1 Very nicely done.
Ryan can be tricky to get a grip on but you did it so well. |
 amalie 2007-03-12 . chapter 1 just a short note to tell you how much I love your writing. I've often found that the characters reactions on the show were a little unrealistic, but you just seem to nail them, especially the way their backround influences how they respond to a situation. ryan and sandy seem incredibly human, not just dramatizing for drama's sake, and the phrase about dawn was just perfect.
great insight! thank you for this:)
amalie |
 Ansy Pansy aka Panz 2007-03-11 . chapter 1aw wow this was really great, so real |
 ninz 2007-03-11 . chapter 1This was a good one. A really good one. Well done. ;-) |
 Rach CD McKenzie 2007-03-11 . chapter 1Yay! I wanted someone to write this missing scene! passed out ryan is too good to miss! Great job, my poor Ryan. I liked the Sandy and Ryan interaction, Sandy trying to get him to open up. Great job! |
 spidergirl91 2007-03-10 . chapter 1hey hi it's ur friendly sar_bear4ryan
this absolutely rocks
i wish this had been in the actual episode, it would've been a much better replacement for the boring julie/jimmy and marissa/julie scenes well done hun |