this was quite a good story. too bad you haven't updated it at all. hope you do continue this.

I can't wait to see what's going to happen next,update soon please.

Dude, this is just too good. You seriously need to update soon.

good

It's amazing you made a story from a confined cell where not much can happen. Nice job. Update please. Honestly, I can't really find much to criticize. The only thing that should improve is perhaps the pace.

Mila! I've always wanted to read something about Mila. That thing she said about the bottle really stuck to me, so I've been wanting to do something Mila related. I'm so glad you wrote this. Everything that we didn't see in the Forsaken Fortress.

Would you like to update please?

Looks great so far-- please, continue.