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| flowntothemoon 2008-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseThat was beautiful. :'D I enjoyed it so much. Kirara's being uptight around awkward questions made by her sister, Komachi's undying cuteness and innocence (I like the way you portrayed that, by the way...she's just such a kid), and Heihachi's willingness to answer with a little moral to come with it. It seems very him, if he wants to teach kids something - or if he wants to teach anyone something, for that matter. It was amusing to read, but there was a special lesson that can be interpreted in many different ways. I like that. :D |
| Shella 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseSounds about right to me. ^__^ A nice little one shot, with satisfying doses of humour and personal philosophy. Lovely. |
| Svaro 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseLOVE! It is, very much like Heihachi to say that. |
| Alchemy Goddess Kitsune 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuse...I enjoyed it. Hei-dono-chan actually squints though. He not closes his smexy eyes nor is he blind. (I know my grammer sucks) It was still good and funny story. Kids always asks whats on their mind and want an answer. I loved Hei-chan's answer too. X3 LOL |
| Azuroh 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's really cute. |
| Ashyx 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseUwa -hugs- I loved that. What a great oneshot ^^ |
| Darkotter 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuse*grins widely* YOU POSTED IT! *chuckles* this is funny, even if its the second time i have read it! hehe... katsu not being willing to admit his ignorince... that sounds like him! |
| Samuraiko 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseCute - I like it! (And go Komachi for asking the obvious.) Michelle aka Samuraiko |