Empress Vader-
Saw your link on DarkAngeltv.com and just read your story.
You did a beautiful job. It was a very touching story. Almost had to grab a tissue there at the end! Keep up the good work!

Wow... This was awesome. I loved this story. It really covered what happened in Zack's past, It GAVE him a past. I really like it, Your an excellent writer, Keep up the AWESOME work & Stories... I am just awed by this one! ;)

You write some to the best Pre-escape stories out there. I totally got into this one and the ending was so Zack... Guess all I really wanna say is good work and keep it up. :)

That story was amazing! It had a cool twist to it that no other story has! your a wonderful writer. Can't wait for more

Very sweet. You did a really good job with this one. I bought into it completely.

"His first words had been "Yes sir" "

Empress your X5 childhood stories are wonderful. You have opened up a world that no one else has delved into. This one is the best and saddest of all. I'm sitting here literally crying for this fictional boy and his mother as if they are completely real. You have an amazing gift. Thanks. a fan.

Aww! That was sweet but kinda like Jack? really weird...

How beautiful. Aww, I really felt for that woman. What did Manticore do in the first years? One can't do much with a drooling baby. And pretty much, until they were at least four, they couldn't do any kind of real training. It really makes you wonder.

It was sweet where Zack took his name. That was so him at the end. She got to see her little boy free though, how sweet.

Incredible. You really captured the atmosphere of manticore and what things were like for Zack and the others. It was very touching how you described the loss of innocence in them as time passed. You're a really good writer, and I hope to see more of your work.

it is cool. not very realistic. but that is what fanfic is about! ttfn