I love this oneshot, really. It's unique, strange (in a nice way,) and captivating.

Very Nice, job. You're probably on of the few writers who know how to balance out the weaving of a story, even though it was short.

That's so sad! :(

if you just took out the part where ginny dies, this could be entirely plausible. naughty ginny. great story.

This is amazing. And sweet. And gorgeous.
Come back someday!

I wasw slitly turned off by that whole Ginny "belonging"to someone thing but I can't deny the fact that it made me shed a few tears.

so sad. im crying now, its so good! I LOVE THIS ONESHOT
i guess ill have to accept that draco/ginny will never work. sniff

Ouch.
I think I felt that one too much.
Interesting take...

-Arciere

this was absolutely amazing!

Say what you like but it almost made me cry!

DRACO IS SMEXY...draco is so smexy he owns dat word...
*runs around waving hands in air*
DRACOO IS SMEXY, SMEXY SMEXY SMEXY SMEXY!

aaw. that was sad. sad but beautiful.

:)

I want to cry.

That is the saddest thing ever!!

I like that you put it from Draco's point of view. It was a bit more interesting that way. And your right - it was just a bit depressing, there at the end. Kinda made me sad that she died, but I guess that's the way of things...

This was really good! It's very well-written, poingant, beautiful. It even works as a sort of untold canon story. To me, it is actually quite believable. Well done and keep up the good work!
Ali