LOL. That is the BEST ending! -laughs- Loved the story, it has been VERY well written, made me laugh at times... -forgot what it was about at first- Anyways, Matantei Loki's on, so I gotta go watch it!
-Wd

Kat: I really love this story, I can't wait for you to update!
Ame: Yeah, update soon, please?

Kat: WOW! I totally love this story! Pleasepleaseplease update, it has been SO over 2 weeks!

YES CHAPTER ^^ Thankies for updating! I love this story to bits! (imaging senel shirtless was kinda hot too) but that's just my pervyness. Yay! Love!
-Wd

BAD! No getting hit with bricks! -Glares at brick shaped bruise- It's fun to act like an idiot. Anyways, I liked the chapter ^^ Keep it up! For all 1 chapters...

Yay you finally updated :D And I actually really like this chapter ^^ I dunno but it flows...really well.

But I always thought Jay weighed less than Senel...wait...does he?

Well anyways great job on this chapter and update when you can~

^__^ Wow I'm really enjoying this thus far~! Heh heh, it kinda went from humorous to dark over time though... ahh well, it's still really good.
Gah that blond nurse XD That made me laugh.
Anyways, keep up the good work and update soon~! ^/^

..oh... I can't wait for you to update!... that blond nurse was hilarious...^.^...

LOL "While the others made their way back to the waiting room, a loud pitched scream echoed down the hall.

The three all shook their head as they realized what had happened and how sad it still seemed to them how someone who fell off a sixty story building, fought monsters five times bigger than him, stood up to some of the most bulk enemies, and took on the Raging Nerifes could be scared of something as small as needles." ROFL!! Sorry. But. Funny. LOL. Yeah. Want. More. Please? -big eyes- Love story,
-Wd

thanks for adding chap. 8! i hope i wasnt too rude the last time i posted... sorry!

Yay! You updated! I like this story! XD Great job!

Heh I laughed about the part where Jay didn't wanna take the cherry medicine. Really...cherry medicine (at least for me) is the most disgusting kind. XP
And I still think it's...ironic that Senel is afraid of needles. Poor Senel...

The only mistake I saw was when you spelled awkward you spelled it occaward. But as you said it was 2 in th emorning when you updated...

Anyways Great chapter and update when you can!

hurry up and finish chapter 8!

Touching really. Also... I'm amazed at what you came up with! I swear, I thought a gunshot had rung out or something!
Senel&Jay: Don't encourage her!
Me: Sorry! Please continue.

OMFG JAY!! Yes. Love. Want? Please update.
-Wd