omg i love all of these the limited word count makes me drool for more.
ive read your other stories as well. very nice. *golf claps*

AHdorable.
SO cute...

Quel horror.
But we know we love them.


...But really-- Longbottom?? ...Hm, I suppose that would be effective in allowing Ron to remain unhurt in this...but I've heard he's a pretty cheater too...


Wondering if there's anyway to connect all these... Hard, but maybe doable...

Kay I read all these (except the last one, because uh...duh) and I'm sorry to say I didn't like any of your drabbles. I won't read more of your stories because of it; the feeling that you're a one-note author is so strong and annoying my first impression is spoiled. Really, it seems like you never try, it's all very juvenile and...I dunno. Uninspired maybe? I'm frustrated because you're probably older than me and pretty talented, but by not pushing yourself you sell all your fics short. You need to develop a writing style, get a beta, develop creative plot ideas (the hide and seek one was at least original), create plot twists, and try writing longer and longer until you can spit out 10-12,0 word chapters. That kind of writing, stuff that you distinguish from the rest by putting yourself into it, is very fun to read and leaves a lasting impact. Take the fic _ Somnio Eternus _. So many twists and turns...great D/Hr fic (despite some problems). Complications and cliffhangers are what make JKR's work so interesting. Just think about it, okay? I know I'm very discriminatory but hopefully I helped. Good luck.

This is really funny! Keep it up!

Avada Kedavra's light is green, not red. Just an FYI.

yay i liked all of these!

wat a fuker!
i would so not do a deal like that even if i did love him! ugh, i hate him in this one. wat a prick

Wow. You really can write marvelously. I love the Draco/Hermione element...very refreshing. LOVE it! Please write more...will you?