very well writen, lots of action and you helped me to get inside of the mutants heads and way of thinking.Excitment!

very inyeresting turn in the story. I expected you were saving the best for last, not at all bad

aw
not much of lulu in this story.

perhaps sometime we could write a joint story. i need to spread my creative wings and let my muse explore!

OMG OMG i cant belive that im alive well melodies alive i am so glad that melodie isnt dead after all and that you found a way to save both brennan and melodie. i cant wait for the sequel that isnt going to be a one shot. great job brenda as always

good to let the readers get some insight os what the other guy is thinking and what motivates him. very good writing

very very good,exceptionally good on the feeling Jesse has on words he never said to whom is now lost

choose me! choose me! i mean come on melodie was pregnant when she died and they can still kill john cates just not right when they save melodie if they save her of course but you already know who you are going to save and i bet its going to be brennan because then if melodies still dead you probably wont right a sequel because i wont keep on pestering you till you do but i still want you to save melodie

i choose to fight too, oh i forgot my character died death by chocolate. great chapter. it would be tough to decide if you were going to fight the monster or join the father as you put it.

short but really good

WHOA you cant leave it like that lol. Update soon please, your gonna be killing me while im waiting lol.


p.s. i hope they both live somehow... (let them both live aka melodie & Brennan. Somehow... lol)

That is a very sucky choice, ::squues:: your back!

very good.Keep up the good work.

Oh! You're back! I almost forgot about this story! *kidding* I can't even remember if I reviewed last chapter, and since I'm too lazy to actually check, I just have to tell you that you better start running. Killing Brennan is one thing; killing Melodie is another. You are seriously looking for a set of broken bones. *heeh*

Well, I'm curious as to what will happen now. Sanctuary brings back so many memories, canon and non-canon both. Do update sooner?

And yah yah... missed you, you big dork. ^_^

really good, its not too short i like it even though melodies dead. she died eating her favourite chocolate that doesnt seem to be a very bad way to die lol. i hope jesse gets better soon he shouldnt stop living just cuz mels dead he still has alex to take care of. i like the part when jesse says “Welcome back to your old life before Melodie.” you cant stop writing what am i going to read then great job brenda i look forward to reading more

I can't believe it. You killed Mel. Evil author. *sticks out tongue* And where the heck are Josh and Zack? Uh, yes, they are still part of the story, thank you very much. Dude, you are so toasted when I catch you. Start running. *prepares whip*