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| RagdollStuffy 2005-12-27 ch 1,  | abuse0.0 Poor Harper *sniff* Good fic :) FYI, story has been Archived. |
| Riviyan Questa 2004-01-04 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome, and you definitely in character. one thing that stuck out though is your spelling of "Nietzschean". im kind of a perfectionist, and small things like that bug me. |
| Acetoorion 2001-10-10 ch 1, | abuseHee hee, nice, I liked the last paragraph! |
| WashoopiCandi1 2001-09-01 ch 1, | abuseIf your gonna make another chapter to this PLEASE hurry!!! This story was so adorable... |
| Sarge 2001-07-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Cute:) I liked it a lot!!! |
| Dalakh 2001-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good -write more please!!!!!!!!!! |
| were-fan 2001-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood story, but I'm not really sure why they were on the deserted planet. Was the buyer supposed to be taking delivery there? If so, why didn't he/she show up? I still liked the story, but I was wondering about that. |
| Mary R 2001-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a very good and exciting story. |
| ~Becky~ bekybob13@aol.com 2001-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL Loved that last paragrah...so true. :) The story was great, but I was wishing there was more! You did a great job with Trance and Harper, so I can't wait until you get another story posted! (I'd hope with those characters as main players again. :) In almost every story about Harper, no one can seem to pick a correct age for him! Tyr calls him "boy" and you gotta wonder how old the "producers" say Harper is....even though the actor himself is 30!?! I couldn't believe it, but it's true! lol |
| Lady MR 2001-07-06 ch 1, | abuseTo your last paragraph "No truer words were ever spoken" Write another story soon!! |
| Katch 2001-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story. A lot of fun, and nicely done. Keep it up! I love your work :) |
| brat64 2001-07-06 ch 1, | abusecute. i loved how you put everything at the end. it was great. cant wait till i see more from u! :)) |
| Melissa2 2001-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I love the Harper and Trance interaction. They're so cute together :) |