cool chapter

It's interesting.

cool chapter
lets hope the guys to make a plan now that they know whats going on
poor Jade though
and poor Kai with having that nightmare
look forward to the next chapter

~SMIFFY

Sounds good. Kai better be careful I say.

great chapter
Team Destination have some wicked attacks, i like Jade's attack, it's really cool.
And the battles are really cool throughout the chapter
look forward to your next chapter

~SMIFFY

cool chapter
I think it's cool how Jade and Tala recognise each other, but they don't know why
Can't wait for your next update
~SMIFFY

Good chapter, keep it up.

It's a good story. I didn't really understand it, sorry.

I liked the cyborgs though and Jade was awesome.

awesome chapter!!
can't wait to see what happens next

cool battle scene, your characters are really starting to develop! As is your story!!
Can't wait for your next update!

cool chapter
can't wait to see what happens next

the plot thickens awesome chapter!
Can't wait to see what Boris has planned

ooh cool clif hanger. That boy is really suspecious or mysterious.
can't wait to see what happens next

awesome chapter!
You've defenatl got the characteristic right for Tyson, Kenny and Hilary!

Correct me if i'm wrong but did u make a vid on u tube about the opening to this story? If not it's someone else and ignore me rambling. If u did the vid was pretty cool! Anyways it's quite interesting with a good plot, but (i'm sorry i hv to pull u up on it) ur spelling needs improving! Apart from that it's fine =)