this is going really well! i don't know what you're planning to do with it in the end, but i want jacob and bella to get together ... if it makes any difference. anyway, its a great story and please update soon!

is this the end?

Oh Edward, when will you ever learn?

amazingness you updated! :D hehe cant wait to know where this is going, please keep them coming! :) angry jealous edward is hott! ud asap!

what?? :O oh my god!! i need more please, where's the rest??

can you please update soon?

OME you can't leave it like that you can't! I really like your story and I am DIEING to know more! So please make it into a story PLEASE!

wow. this is really good. I mean, REALLY good. it has to go on. that ending--its too cruel. such a cruel way to torture your readers. it's a cliffhanger, a really good one, and im nearly falling off already. DONT LEAVE ME HANGING!

-Zara

you should contiune on with this story.

COME ON MAKE EDWARD KICK JACOBS BUTT!but anyway it was very good

Oh, I do hope you post another chapter soon! I really do like what you have so far, and I know that this story can progress into an amazing one!

wow is very good! conty pronto plis!

0_0 amazin! i loved it! ^^

I like where this is going, Update!

The REAL Alice Cullen ^_~

I like it. I don't think that Bellawould spend time with Jake just to make Edward jealous. She isn't that way. She'd spend time with Jake because he's her friend and she cares about him. Anyway, I love it. Keep it coming!