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CSIFan4Life
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseI'm sorry for taking so long to read and review this fic. It was great and it seemed like it would be a perfect ending scene for an episode.

~Jackie~
TwistedSister03
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseaw that was so cute! smacked for ever!! =]
Kday89
2007-03-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseAww.Seems like good characterisation of Mac to forget but make it right in the end.Hope it's not just a one shot :) looking forward to chapter 37 of semper fi *hint hint* lol.
bigmelinafan
2007-03-13
ch 1,
abuseawh cute LOL
love it
xoxoxoxoxox
Tricki
2007-03-13
ch 1,
abuse*Great* story! Suck on that Peyton whose name rhymes with Satan!! He chose Stella over you! *does victory dance*
And I so agree that Melina was robbed *glares*
Anyway, love it! Keep up the great work :D xoxox
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuse*snickers* Hahahaha! He ditched Peyton for the better person: Stella! hehehehe


Too bad that was a one-parter. I was kind of interested in seeing the tension play out between Mac and Peyton; and to see if he would dump her for Stella. ;o)


LOVED IT!

~mandi *_*
vipercharmed
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuseAW, I love Mac Stella, there should be more stories like this instead of D/L.
LucyStar7
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abusereally nice story Mac belongs to Stella ! i like the way he left Peyton to make sure Stella's alright ;-)

and don't forget to update Semper i love this one ...
*waiting*
Dakota Storm
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuseoh you have to continue with this story please
mercy4vr
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuseTheir relationship defies the boundries of a normal friendship, it goes so much further, and I think you have shown that well in your writing. But as someone else mentioned... you really could continue it... ;)
Murgy31
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuseI lOVE IT!
mj0621
2007-03-11
ch 1,
abuse*pulls her hair out*
gah! this is the second SMacked fic I read today and its the second time Ill tell that...

its a great fic but why end it there T_T... lol

i wanna see how peyton reacts or such...
and.. more! lol
finally some smacked writers are coming out...thanks for posting. ;D its so great
-mj(wgf)
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