excellent!! you should write another

jean is way hotter than emma ;)

o.m.g.!! i am a huge scott and jean fan, but im also a huge logan and jean fan lol. youre amazing :)

lol i love what you did with remy and rogue :D nite so excited about the whole emma-scott thing tho lol, im a big fan of scott and jean so i cant wait to see what happens!

omg! love the story so far, but i absolutely hate emma frost and the fact that scott actually did it with her! but nice story

Ai que lindo o ultimo capítulo!1
Amei, de verdade, quase choro, só n chorei pq n dá tenho tenho que ir dormir pq eu tô cochilando aqui no PC
Só digo que amei.
Espero outra!
bjs

Nice! A fitting end to a very interesting story! I have to say this isn't like other stories I've read. The way you laid this out, worked the characters, and brought it all together was really something. It's quite a spin on the Scott/Jean/Emma affair and I think you handled it every well. There were times I thought the characters were a little OOC and I wish we could have seen Scott's reaction after the end of the last chapter when Jean told him about Nathan. But this ending really works nicely. It shows how they can come together and move forward. Too bad we didn't get to see what happened to Emma. That would have been a nice conversation to have. lol Overall, great job! A very nice story and a very enjoyable read! Keep up the great work! I look forward to your next one! Slickboy out.

I swear their children will kick **.

Que que lindo esse capítulo!
não é o ultimo né?
Quero mais!

Now, this is getting somewhere. They need to get their spark back together. They need to get their love back on track that they've lost for so long. It tells us that Scott feel sorry for Jean, and I'm sure this is a chance to give their romance another shot. I just hope that they'll make it through. I Can't wait for more chapters. Update REAL SOON. I'll be waiting.

this is an amazing beautiful story. please dont say it is the last of it. i need to read more chapers on it.

okay, so oh my word i absolutely adore reading this story! it is one of the best works of fiction i have read... if i had to write a story i would want it to have the same melodrama and suspense and joy... because i am the hugest jean grey fan i really love the whole true love she and scott share and how he realises that she is the one he loves. i would just like to know are you intending to add any more chapters or is chapter 19 the end? please add more...

Wow...seriously, just wow. I can't say put it in any other words besides that. I have to admit I was skeptical. Hell, I was downright bewildered at times how this could end up a Scott/Jean story when there was so much riding against them. But in this one chapter you completely blow me away with sheer awesomeness! It all seems to have worked out, but not in the cleanest of ways. lol So that baby Scott obsessed over with Emma wasn't even his. That's pretty low for Emma if not a little OOC, but given the context of this story it works. It seems to fall in place. Emma's baby was the only think tying Scott to her. Now that the secret is out, she can't keep her hold on him. I think she knows that. But I don't think she's going to leave it at that.

I have to say I was also worried about why Jean was staying away for so long. It did feel really OOC until this chapter. Now it makes perfect sense. She was pregnant. Going back to that one chapter where they 'reunited' seems to bring it all together! Now not only has she allowed him to come back, she shows him that he's a father. So in the end Scott got the child he wanted. Only it was from Jean. Nothing wrong with that! lol

I have to say, this has been brilliantly put together. I'm really amazed by it! So what's going to happen now? Will Jean let Scott back in so they can be a family again? Will they get married? I really want to know! Please keep up the excellent work! Again, I applaud you for your brilliance in this story! Slickboy out.

O-O THE SHOCK!

Olá, Maia.

É ótimo ver mais um brasileiro aqui no site, ainda mais quando participam de projetos grandiosos como o seu. Sua fiction é excelente, ainda não havia lido nada assim. Você descreve os personagens muito bem, algo que, às vezes, não acontece nas HQs.

Foi interessante ver o Scott divido entre a Emma Frost e a Jean Grey. Quando saiu a série Phoenix - Endsong, imaginei uma cena entre o Scott, Emma e a Jean muito parecida com a que mostrou, por isso, fiquei entusiasmada quando li sua história. Infelizmente nada disso ocorreu na série limitada, mas foi uma boa história.

Bem, depois de ler seu trabalho, posso apenas dizer que me motivou ainda mais em tentar continuar a escrever um fiction que comecei há algum tempo sobre o jogo Baldur's Gate.

Para finalizar, parabéns pelo trabalho e continue firme.

Abraços!