This is too cute! I love the fluff. I love how Youko is jealous of himself!

love it

Interesting concept! XD Nice job, the beginning is awesome!

love the story

doesn't youko in the future realize that its him in the past that is her other lover or are his memories a bite foggy from 500 years ago

No! I want more to this one! Like a full blown epic story of it! I can just see it now, how they met, how she fell, then how they met again! How she struggles with both of him, even maybe to see him die and help him find an unborn child or something! Ah, the possibilities to this one.

This is cute, kinda ironic though. Poor Youko, only competing with himself...lol

defiantly worth favoring ( :

*snickers* I bet that would be funny to him later on, as Kurama.

Interesting, though, with this relationship as it is. I like it.

I really like the complication of a time twist that you added to the story.

A sequel from Kurama's perspective would be fun to read, do you have one? Are you going to write one?

Oh I love it! The intesity, the passion...the coldness and yet hot lust of Yoko! And its a nice touch that he doesnt know about Kurama and is jealous of him...
This woud make a great fic, if you continued it! You've got great talent!

hahaha it was so funny!^_^

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. And well-written too. I love the fact that there's no dialogue, that none is needed. The untold reveals more than words can. Great job!

Well this was an odd one. But very enjoyable. I liked the idea and you played it out so well! Bravo!

An excellent portrayal of Youko as his past self.

~Pretty