Beautifully written :) I LOVE it. It is so perfect, and yet so imperfect <3 it is just like what would happen in the real thing. Very in character and awesome!

that made me cry! i loved it so much!!

Wonderful. Exactly.

... I'm stunned.
Literally.
Ansem/Riku is something I've never supported, but... I loved this so much, it terrifies me.
The title says it all, really.
Wonderful.

Leah x

the title says it all; this was Wonderful

Wow. Very well written piece of work. Keep writing!

Ha! Sora lost Riku to ANSEM! I find that hilarious! Because the kid annoys me a little.

I think this was really well written. I liked it a lot.

Keep up the good work!

-cries-

oh god, that was beautiful. Sad, horrible and disturbing, but still so undeniably beautiful.

Poor, poor Riku.

Sora's an idiot.

Hm... I'm not sure where to start with this review. All in all, it was a very wonderful piece of work, but it scared the crap out of me all the same. Beautiful and dark, and I personally love it.

I would honestly say more, but i'm a little speechless. Instead, i'll just run off to read some more of your stories.

SO in the end, Riku ended up with Ansem?
Wow, that was a shock...Very nicely writen though.
Good Job~!

When I first read this, all I could think was: o.O

But in truth, it's actually really, really good. The way you address the reader as if they're Riku makes the feelings so much stronger, and you feel his pain when he thinks Sora doesn't want him. And I never thought I'd like Ansem/Riku, but man that was cool. xP

I'm done rambling now.

Jacqueline Out.

Wow, I felt so bad for Riku in the end. It was sad, and that's all I can think of right now.

I am in awe.

omg. that last line is amazing. when i read it up near the beginning i was like 'yes, yes that is amazingly twisted and perfect!' and i'm so glad it found its way to the last line.
i wanted to cry and stop reading this so many times, but dammit, i couldn't. i just couldn't tea my eyes away from the screen.
and i love the bizarre relationship between riku and ansem and hell, even sora. it was like nothing i've ever read before. showing rape as something almost desirable in a way (at least towards the end).
amazing job. amazing.

This was a beautiful written work. Parts made me cry. Parts made me moan. You have immense talent.