I like this a lot! Guessing it's either on hiatus, or abandoned now though?? Anyway, I love that you've brought Sully into it - he's such an endearing character!

OMG I'm so glad you updated! I loved this chapter, I'm glad that Booth and Bones made up and she explained some of it to him. And Carlos is gorgeous! Try to fit him in later please! Love this!

So GOOD!! I really liked this story and wondered where it went. It really is hard with the gaps in between and I had to reread to reorient myself. If you could please update sooner that would be so excellent. Great chapter! Cheers! UPDATE SOON!

I love the idea of Brennan being friends with a gang-banger. I really liked your explanation of her history and how they had a bond. I liked how you showed Booth being jealous and then when he realized who it was he was anle to justify to himself his jealousy as anger..ok im rambling on, but I was just reading a few of your more recent fan fics and I discovered this one, Its a great story, and I was wondering why didn't you finish it.

Sorry to nag you, but come on you gotta write more! You seem to be a talented writer who's got a solid grasp of the characters! Finding both of those things around here is often very hard, so I'm gonna keep bugging you until you update again! I love your story, so please, please come back to it!

I really liked the first chapter of this story. Bones having a safe place/person from childhood is believable and great, and so well written. However, I really don't like how Booth reacted. When he ranted in front of Ang, suddenly Bones's safe place isn't. Neither Angela or Booth have ever treated her past with respect. They demand she act differently, or state that she isn't right for the job (when cam came) or emotionally defunct (like with her brother). They do so with blame. I don't think she should have to explain herself or defend herself if they were true friends, which she continually does. And Booth does realistically rant after the Epps thing, but I hope in your story, you treat her relationship with Manos better. Don't use Bones to take him down, or make her drop him to keep working with the FBI. I don't see her giving up her protector/friend/haven, especially in an ultimatum. Go Bones.

THIS is AWESOME i've been thinking that brennan could have ties with someone like this i could imagine it it's very in charcter 'cept bones would not walk out naked but it does help the story by leaving a lot to the imagination of seeley booth's mind
lol greeat =) *thumbs up the best review i've given yet

More =D

I'm missing this story! I'm really looking forward to reading more. I imagine Angela is going to have a little talk with Brennan about the info she just learned. I want to see how you handle that and I'm hoping Brennan will share with her a little more about her and Carlos. Please come back to this story soon!

Yeah, so I think you totally got everyone in character!
I'm so glad you decided to continue this fic!
Maybe your next chapter could be Carlos' perspective?
Just a thought... :)

I love this story! I think Brennan having a friend like this is totally plausible and an intriguing idea to explore in a fanfic. I love what you've done so far, so please keep up the great work and post another chapter soon!

Oh man, this is good. I really, really like the whole Carlos thing. Its pretty believable, all round. Please keep it up!

I really admire your writing style. It is amazingly descriptive but not overly and it has the right amount of well... everything. please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

great chapter. can't believe these two why can't they talk and get things out in teh open. all this bickering will just distroy them.

please don't get sully romantically involved with her. get booth and bones to talk.

look forward to the next chapter

wow, great chpater. lots of good things in this one. the whole thing was pretty good. all of the booth and bones stuff was well written and i feel accurate to their characters. well done. i can't wait to see what you do with sully. but, no clown shooting? that was such a great moment. ah well. more soon please!