still waiting for the end

I love this fic. It truly is great. Have a wonderful time on your trip. :)

Love Carlos. Hate this dispassionate Sully. Sorry you'll be gone for awhile. Looking forward to how this one ends.

Wow. Brilliant chapter :)

The characterisation of both Brennan and Booth was spot on - in my opinion anyway.

Great idea! Looking forward to the choice next time.

Is Carlos by any chance based off Ranger in Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum series? They seem very similar, and Ranger's real name is Carlos Manoso! I thought there had to be some kind of connection there.

By the way, the 'damsel in a dress' line cracked me up!

woah. intense. :)

YAY! It makes me unbelievably happy that this story is back. So dont abandon it anytime soon. :) Also, if you let them catch Carols I may have to do something drastic. Such as cry myself to sleep. Yes, that is currently the worst threat I can think of. Definitely love him, mainly because hes the bad guy and the good guy. Update again!

I am so happy you picked this up again! I actually have stopped regularly watching Bones for the last season/season and a half. The time where your story is set it probably my favorite time in the Bones plotline.

I love Carlos. Sort of a chaotic good or even a chaotic neutral, but still a wonderful friend for Brennan.

Ok first, I am soo excited your continuing this story! I loved it when you first started writing and was disappointed that you'd seemingly abandoned it.

Next, love love love Carlos! It's great that Bones has someone who's just silently there for her that's from her past. (I might be slightly bitter with the idea of Booth and Bones since I love it but am boycotting this season after last season's clusterscrew and seeing from a preview that Booth got a girlfriend).

Anyway, I can't wait to read more!

Carlos good guy, Booth even better guy :0)

Can't wait for the next chapter

I'm so glad you are continuing thing! I look forward to reading the rest as you post it :)

I'm so glad you decided to continue this story.

I love Carlos, from the way I read this story he seems like a good guy with questionable ethics, but good none the less.

WoW! This story had me sitting very alertly reading this.

I've wondered at times if Brennan kept in touch with anyone from her foster days.

Glad Carlos was there.

Great writing.

I just found this story, and I really enjoyed it. I wish you would continue it at some point.