 coffee.apples.cookie.eaters 2009-09-13 . chapter 13Deathstroke nyaa~
oh god, this was perfect; dramatic, sad, beautiful, funny and sexy. It had it all!! I almost cry when they were saying goodbye and robin was begging and stuff T^T but and I really loved the ending.
please don't EVER stop writing, I enjoy a lot your stories, you've made my hole week, and, now I can go to sleep, it's 4:42 in the morning xD bye bye! take caare! |
 takara94 2009-03-01 . chapter 3So cute~~! |
 hanakisa 2009-01-18 . chapter 13have you made the one-shot sequal yet?? if so what is it called!!?!! |
 Bakkazaru from DA 2008-07-23 . chapter 13 Oh, the moment when Robin's begging Slade in the end... made me cry, like whoa, I know I must sound stupid but god that was sad... I wanna draw this!
But nao, let's sleep! *it's 2:20 am here* |
 Touch of the Wind 2008-07-19 . chapter 13A Sad Beautiful ending to this story...well done... |
 Middy 2008-07-10 . chapter 13 Ahh this was so good. Plus, we all know that Slade could never die.. NEVER DIE! D<
haha. Great story! |
 GraysonGirl 2008-07-09 . chapter 13would have reviewed this so much earlier! But was on holiday.
Aw, that ending was so flufftastic and sweet. Like swimming in sugar.
Beastboy and Robin hanging out more was a really nice little touch, and would definitly happen.
I understand cyborg and star's reaction too, these fic's where all of them are ok with it (when Robin is gay) right away are a little unrealistic. Teen's would be a little freaked out by it at first.
Slade and Terra had a beautiful ending too. "Can you introduce me to your family when we die?" was such a gorgeous line! |
 IonicAmalgam 2008-07-05 . chapter 13...unexpected...and expected...somewhat of a paradox...lol.
Anyway, the story ends quite open ended, and I think it's good, compared to how most animated series end anyway (which usually means a really bad ending).
Hope you continue writing!
-noian |
 Raven-loves-Sanji 2008-07-01 . chapter 13*cries* omg that was the saddest ending to a fanfiction i read in a very, very, very long time.
i thoroughly enjoyed this story (like OD) and the ending completed it perfectly.
i will be on the lookout for that one-shot~ |
 cutiecat92 2008-07-01 . chapter 13oh my god! i was crying through most of that chapter and im still crying now!
all i have to say is this: SEQUEL!
oh god, the tears wont stop!
i dont think ive ever been so moved by a fanfic before in my life, and ive been reading fanfic's for over 2 years now!
oh god, this chapter was so...I'VE STARTED CRYING AGAIN!
i haven cried so much since i was 10! and im 15 now!
please make a sequel!
from a moved and loyal fan |
 FantasyMind93 2008-07-01 . chapter 13i gotta say, a very touching ending^^. and i'm sorry you had to go through all that crap. yeah, i read ur profile.
so just wanna say that ur an amazing writer and u actually got me into liking the sladin shipping^^. |
 kitsunechibiko 2008-07-01 . chapter 13I missed you so much! And I've waited for this chapter for so long!! I'd totally luv a one-shot sequal! Or, anything really! Much luv! Much luv! Much luv! Much luv! Much luv! |
 loopylouise123 2008-07-01 . chapter 13Wow, it's finally finished.
I liked the way you followed canon, to an extent, even if Terra and Slade 'died' at the end. But it is more realistic this way, and it gives our two boys a chance to reconnect with the ones they love in the future.
Great work! |
 Wynja 2008-07-01 . chapter 13-wails- I went through them all! -points at pile of tissues- but THANK you for that little hope at the end... It was a truly cataclys... cataclysm... cat... **... I CAN'T SPELL IT! You know what I mean... great ending! I'm just overwhelmed... my heart is beating really hard and my eyes are all itchy and red now... umm... thank you? Good thing I'm not xpecting company or anything -sniffles and blows my nose-
I'm going to let this settle and then I'm going to reread the whole story in a day or so... since some of the funniest things are in this story... like the underwear... *lol*
In this story I really, and completely unexpected, burst out laughing at the "and Cyborg simply thought that he was malfunctioning" line... i can just picture it... eyes wide and the... "Nahh... probably a glitch..." ;o)
I'm so proud of you! Which is a bit weird since you are the "senior slash-writer" (yes, that's a title... like a CEO but better, add it to your business card)that I look up too... but I'm proud of you anyway!
*hugs*
/Wynja |
 badkidoh 2008-06-30 . chapter 13wow you updated and i believed the story die for a bit. good job kind of. ya know. |