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| JustCallMeMarly 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. Thanks for posting it! It was very bittersweet and really well-written. Thanks again! |
| Missish 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I wish it would happen in the show *sighs* |
| Steeldust-01 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story ! I really love it and I hope taht you'll write a sequel ! |
| AliasCSINYFriendsER 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseOh that's too bad for Peyton. ;o) Such a shame. :-p No really...you did a fantastic job with her POV. You should write one with the aftermath for Mac and Stella. Like when they finally get a clue? heheheeh LOVED IT! ~mandi *_* |
| vipercharmed 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked this fic a lot. Personally I loved it Because if it has anything to do with Mac and Peyton breaking up do to his relationship with Stella I know for sure I like it. I love all of your stories they are great. |
| mj0621 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseate, have to say one thing... bumalik ata pagka MacPeyton ko O_O lol i feel bad for her now -_-;*grumbles* and you know, this is exactly i was wondering about... the scene between him and peyton after the hug... and the 'thing' about telling stella about them and she became distant to him... :D i gotta say my brain is content :D thanks for making this fic ate, you rock :) -mj(wgf) |
| csifreak12 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThat really IS a great story!! I have to say, I don't really like Peyton 'cause I'm totally SMACKED...but your story is really lovely. Thank you for that!! *g* |
| Crazy Mokis 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseYou've made me feel sorry for Peyton... that's not good :lol: Great job as always... Ah! How i love angst! |
| Noone 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nicely done. A few distracting errors, but overall really great job -- especially considering it was done in less than 2 hours. I really liked how you portrayed Peyton. |
| fruitbat00 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Very nicely written from Peyton's POV and kudos to you for not making her the villain or the victim. Very nicely done. I could so see this playing out on screen. I like the idea of every one watching and hoping that Mac and Stella see whats right in front of them, including Peyton. Now if you could just convince the producers... |
| mercy4vr 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abuseBravo! Good fic! Seems to me that you rose to the challenge quite well. |