Your points of pondering remind me of my English teacher's quizzes!

1) Hm... let's see... I really think Fox and the other "spies"
jumped to conclusions too quickly.

2) Zelda did a pretty good job of handling the situation. She explained things to Ness, who seemed to grasp the concept of... ahem... and she held strong throughout the questioning. I think those frames could've beaten her to death and she still wouldn't have told them the truth. Same thing for Ness. These smashers seem to have a good deal of trust and loyalty between themselves. Had Falcon not rushed in, I think she or Ness might've been seriously injured or worse. However, I don't exactly agree with how she retributed the guilty; unleashing brutal anger on Samus and smacking Falcon in the hallway with people watching her (in the match at least) was definite cause for suspicion. Perhaps she should've waited to speak with them privately and deal with them then, rather than letting her anger get the best of her.

3) I didn't understand this question- were you directing it at the readers as FalSam being the parties, or if they were the ones to blame for the ordeal? Because I liked having them as the couple. Obviously, considering it's me, lol. But they also seem more mature about this sort of thing, and older and wiser as well, not to mention a little more "canon". Plus, I can't imagine Mario and Peach... *cough*. As for the "to blame" theory, yes, but it's more of Falcon's fault, as he stated in the "flashback" in the seventh chapter. If his aim was just a little better...

4)Yeah, I think Master overreacted. Torture to draw out the answers? He could've at least gone for the good cop/bad cop strategy and be a little nicer. The "spies" misunderstood the situation in the first place.

Ladycordelia,

I am so sorry I stopped reading this. Things got complicated and at first things were going kind of slow for me..but as i read it over I realized maybe I just wasn't getting the general ideal of your fic. I read all the chapters adn I must say this is very impressive. Another good work as always.

Not that I'm surprised. Unlike most writers you have a style all your own. Something no one can take away from you. I am very envious, of your work. Though the lord tells me not to be envious in the bible. But I guess I can just say this fic is really beautiful. If there are more chapters, you can definitely gurantee that I will read it.

I must say, Zelda really is a true friend to Samus. I can understand her reasons for beating Samus and Falcon. They were pressuring her limits of keeping their secret. That was a very tough interrogation and I gotta give it to Zelda and Ness for sticking it out.

It seems most things are resolved, but seeing there isn't a complete under this fic, I'm sure there are more interesting moments to come. I'm eager to see.

~*~Royal Kenya~*~

Good, good. Captain Falcon did step up to the plate...

*rereads the farewell scene* Aww! Those suspensions better pass quickly!

And this chapter has also backed up my idea of using "If I Never Knew You" by Jon Secada and Shanice as the music for a possible FalSam slideshow I've been working on... X3 ("I never knew that fear and hate could be so strong, all they'd leave us were these whispers in the night... but still my heart is saying we were right...")

Sorry I didn't catch this at the premiere! My brother's hogged the computer all weekend! Happy Easter, go for the ears on the chocolate bunny! =:3

It was nice to see the story in one of the bounty hunters' view points, particularly Falcon's! Captain Douglas Falcon... it has a ring of nobility to it, you know? And yet, he ponders the noble thing to do in this situation... maybe Samus has an opinion on this as well.

XD I love it I love it I love it! XD

*gasps* Master Hand! Oh, I'd like to backhand HIM right now for what he's done to Zelda and Ness...

How are they going to talk their way out of this? How will Zelda protect Falcon and Samus's secret? Goddesses, this is getting good...

Too lazy to sign in for this one... meh...

Decent battle descriptions, but the chapter was just a little too short for me. It does, however, have me anticipating the next one soon!

I actually slapped myself across the face just for the efects of seeing what the last scene was like. Dun-dun-dun, it seems Zelda's wanted with Master Hand...

Keep it up!

~bijoukaiba

Lol, I liked the trio of spies... for some reason, I could just picture them sitting in a tree watching through the window of the library (just in the assumption it'd be on the second or third floor), leaning dangerously on weak branches to get a glimpse in the window, fingertips gripped as tightly as possible on a windowsill.

And what will happen when Zelda confronts the guilty parties? Duh-duh-dun...

I realize it's supposed to be drama, but somehow I could imagine this becoming more humorous, like if the spies found the encyclopedia left open on a page about, say, snipers, and they start getting paranoid about Zelda and Ness trying to kill someone. XD Bloody unlikely and OOC, but I'm just ranting. It's your fanfic, and I'm not trying to influence it in anyway.

Can't wait until chapter 3! Glad this was updated quickly! And let's hope Falcon's aim gets beter next time... .>

Hm... Good so far. It's nice that Zelda was able to lecture Ness about reproduction and all the details for it. I guess it's still appealing to me, as I am still curious to find out what happens next. The only problem I find in this chapter is "Young Link" being bunched up together as if it's one word. I think it may be the site's doing when you are uploading it? Well, have fun with your writing and update soon.

-BKP

Hm... Very good description. I liked the beginning part a lot! At first though, I thought you were describing Zelda! XD XP Well, that was so cool. I'm glad to see Samus and Captain Falcon having a cool, romantic relationship. Most people think that Captain Falcon is a pervert of some sort and yeah. It's really nice to see that though! I think you are off to a very good start, so you should stop worrying about you reputation and all that. I'mma gonna watch this, so I'll keep my eyes peeled for the update! ^_^ Don't worry too much about what others think of you. Write what you want. :D

-BKP

Hahaha, that came off as a bit funny to me.

I think I'll keep up with this story.

With randomness,

-Sage

Ahh... I see, this is the fiction you thought of putting up? Ah well, it was really similar to the other one I read. Some of the ideas even sounded the same, but I suppose since it was written differently, it's not EXACTLY the same. And I like the way you've written it. But it seems as if your purpose is different from the other writer's. Your's seems to be located in the Drama category, while the other was in humor.

I would like to see where this goes nontheless!

*dies* The prologue was excellent, I liked your description of Captain Falcon. He is handsome, no? :3 And a dedication to me? *tackles ladycordelia17* That was awesome! Hm, how do I show my gratitude...?

Lol, I loved Ness's innocence! That's part of what makes kids so adorable, ya know?

I hope my review counts as five or six people's opinions, because I DO NOT want to see this story taken down. ^_^ Heh, pardon my perverseness, but I really do love this story...

*hugs author*

Heh...I lied. I read it right away and I found time to review. Well...gotta admit this is very similar to the other fic. But the big "Diff" between the two, you actually are going somewhere with this fic unlike that other untalented fool. Well..maybe saying he has no talent is cruel, but this is way better than what he had. His made me want to stop right away, while yours leaves that interesting suspense you have in all chapters.

To make a long review short.
I am so interested to see where this is going. (even if I'm not a big sam/falcon fan)

Update ASAP and this was a good start.

~*~Royal Kenya~*~