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Mutant Flip
2008-10-08 . chapter 2
This story has such a great premise and lots of potential. PLEASE don't let it die! I'm beggin' ya!
Erentei Lord of Insanity
2007-03-31 . chapter 2
Hm. Pretty good. I'd like to see in a later chapter, the Ranma-Chans' revenges on their authors. That'd make a good finish-up, I think.
ranma girl 14
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
nice,plz plz plz update soon ^_^
James Axelrad
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
an interesting start. looking forward to where you are going with this fic.
Ranchee
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
lol oh boy this seems to be a really neat story i cant wait for the next update.he he love the traq rifle divine justice for the dads ,they deserve it.Keep up the most excellent work.
Sopchoppy
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
I have to say, I am immensely intrigued
Ghent Johanson
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Good story. If you want too feel free to include any of my Ranma-chan's if you want. I've pretty much stopped writing all together. I look forward to seeing more of this.
MZephyr
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Congratulations. You've got me interested in a story where Ranma is stuck as a girl, something I didn't think was possible. Keep up the good work.

It would be nice if you could find someone to preread for you, to help catch the mistakes. Some of them can be a bit jarring, like the use of "nothing" instead of "not" in "Someone's nothing going to like waking up tomorrow."
Upgrade
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Hm. Not exactly sure what the girls are after. Going after the newly split girl-type Ranma as a "recruit", or something else.

Sitting there ignoring her while playing a board game is "asking questions and being really scrutinizing and stuff"?
Oh, well. They're probably used to hangover-like symptoms by now.
Kitsune
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Now its getting fun...
Materia-Blade
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Kick outta small girls, big guns? Heh heh. Not bad though I was a bit confused through some of it. not quite sure why. Where is this going? What is an end goal here? Out of curiousity?
Dumbledork
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
This fic is rather enjoyable so far.
ranko lina Inverse
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Friend I just don't know what to say beside UM What the Blip is going on. This seems more of an okama I think I spelled that right ya know those short jokes stories that people put at the end or begining of a story
MingShun
2007-03-14 . chapter 2
Jeez, I'm having trouble imagining multiple Ranma-chan's...
Upgrade
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Not sure about this one yet, but it's good so far.
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