Interesting. Short but leading to so many possibilities.

good alt. ending there, very well written

plz r/r mine if you want to

Short but sweet.

You are continuing this right? I mean, seriously, Its good and worth continueing. I hope you write more seriuosly. But, for now I hafta go, please update this. It doesn't matter how many reviews you are getting, its about pleasing those who are readnig your story! Please write more _

ya i know how corny that sounded, but its one of my longest reviews.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa*deep gasping breath*aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwww!;.; That was great:)!

Awwwwww...LOVED the story. Very sweet.

oh! how sweet!

uhhhhhhhhh...um...hehe... Jareth is mine though...hehe...love the story..very sweet yet dark and mysterious!

It was a pretty good beginning for a story, I liked it I hope you finished

it.

Er...I'm confused! Which isn't too unusual, but I want to be unconfused nonetheless! Okay, so, the movie ends the way it did before, but instead of Sarah running upstairs and all is sweet and happy, Jareth (in the form of a beast) attacks her? Then, after he 'rips through her' she stands there,, unmarred, and somehow breaks him? Well, it certainly is original! And I mean that as a compliment, not sarcasm. I only have one gripe: you feel prey to the JE effect. To understand what I am talking about, read Inimitability II (shameless plug, just shameless...). Ahem. Nice work.

awwwww so short but sooo sweet! -!

aw.. absolutely beautiful... wonderful... fantastic... *sigh* you are NOT a bad writer! _

This is really good!