Really good. I liked this a lot.

with this being 5/5 im thus assuming no one gets to find out about the baby then.

Okay, I really started to cry when he read the letter. Wow. Excellent job. That's all I can think to say right now. Wow. ^Femme

OMG, I got a little teary at the end. Off to read the next chap, but great job. ^Femme

My heart is breaking for her. Very moving, and very well written. ^Femme

"We can rebuild her...we have the technology." Sorry, I had to put that in there. It popped into my head when papa Adama told her that. Great chap. I've always loved the relationship between Kara and the Admiral. It tugs at the heartstrings, ya know? ^Femme

Poor Kara. The story of her life should be "out of the frying pan and into the fire." Things just never go her way. Great job. ^Femme

Oh, this is so sad. Glad to see what was in Kara's letter - again it's so sad that they both lost their chance because they were too scared to take it. Lee and Bill grieving together was very touching.

Just found this and really enjoyed it. Particularly chapter two and the scene with Adama, because that is one that was sorely missing on the show, the reconciliation between them.
Chapters 3 and 4 are just so sad with Kara letting Lee go and then letting everything go, I think you do a great job showing her emotions and reasons though and they seem very plausible.

o, i wonder what the letter entails and does adama suspect anything with her not drinking. and i wonder what will happen when the baby info is revealed.
i was rather suprised she went to adama. but touched. and it totally makes sence given what she is to do. thouh it makes that scene between lee and adama in the next ep interesting though im thinking you are not using those eps.