:D wow, great chapter... good length too! (actually haven't read it yet though)-- just dropping by to add you to my watch and bookmark your page. it's 2:00am here so I'll have to read this later! <3

Chapters 38, 40, and 41.

I have one more question.

Is it Taiyou, Taiyon or Tairow?
I'm just wondering. I am still waiting for that next chapter or story.

Your reader,
Clawstrike590

Hey, its me again. I like the idea you sent me. Thanks for that trailer by the way. Thank you also for telling me its Yukiyo.
I do hope that you will still continue this story, I find it really amazing that I even asked some of my friends who like Avatar to check the story out.
This is still a great story and thanks for writing it. I am looking forward to read more of your stories in the near future.

Your reader,
Clawstrike590

Hi, I like the story although I'm only half-way through.
Can I ask you a question?


Is it "Yuyiko" or "Yukiyo"?
Iwas just wondering. I love the story. I really do hope you create more Avatar FanFictions. Thanks!

Great to have you back, Strategist.

This new chapter was great. Those master bender were tough, but Taiyon was too bad-@$$ to handle. It a shame that he didn't say anything, but after making his first connection to an Avatar since the cycle began perhaps we will see him again.

Hope the next update wont take as long as this one.
Good luck with the story.

Alright

This is awesome!

Please update soon

Please update soon

I am so sorry it took me this long to review. No excuses.

Good chapter, the interactions were interesting. The story of the lightning benders was intriguing. It seems to me alot like how the sand benders came to be. Its both believable and adds some depth.

The Emperor/Kai-lin dialog was good even if it had a bit of the same old "kindness is weakness/I can not bring myself to exploit my powers" bit that most dialogs like these has. I'm not calling it cliche, i'm just saying it for what it is.

Still I found this a good addition to the story and look forward to see how you decide to wrap it up (in how many chapters that will take). It will be interesting to see what happens with Azula and Aang fight along side each other, thats bound to be fun to read. All the best and good look with the next chapter.

Also good luck with the new story. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.

Another good chapter Strategist.

Not much action, but good setup, revealing the Emperor's strategy and Kai-lin's response to it. I can hardly wait to see Aang and Azula fighting side by side. Though it's a little hard to believe Aang doesn't realize that the girl he's helping really IS Azula and not someone who bares a resemblances.

As for Kai-lin and the Emperor, I like the back and forth between about what a true leader is and the purpose of power.

It's a good build for the battle.

i love this story plz continue!

Oh yay the battle we've all been waiting for between Kai-lin and the Emperor is coming up. I can't wait to read on. You're an amazing writer!!
Update soon! :]

Nice chapter my notorious friend! once again, absolutely love your writing style!

Keep it up!

Sweet new chapter seems this battle is almost over, Im eager to see the final battle between Kai-lin and the emperor. See ye in the next chapter.

From Venezuela
D4rK

Look first I just have to say when the common man does not know what is best for him, his wife, their children (and with lousy educational system and widespread stupidity and ignorance this can be very prevelent) then the benevolent intellectual must take control and force the common man to make a better world for him or if not for him then his children and children's children. Of course make education great so the common man does know what is best for him, his wife, and their children. That being said, I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! IT WAS AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!! I loved the Emperor and Kai's dialogue, I loved how the good guys interacted, I loved loved LOVED how Azula and Kai interacted, she kissed him WOOHOO. I really hope they save the world and we can see some more togetherness action between them. I can't remember if I asked for Ty Lee, maybe Jin and Ji Shu(or is her order chase) to have boyfrieds as well but now I really only care about seeing Azula and Kai togetherness action, though I would be pleased if they did. Please update soon more Kai and Azula togetherness action after they kick the bad guys' butts! YOU ROCK!!