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prophet144
2008-11-26 . chapter 6
I hope you finish this story. I'd really like to see how things turn out for Jase and Tommy.
gundamgirl
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Please update!! I'm dying to know what happens!
KuJoe
2008-03-03 . chapter 1
You TOTALLY have to write the next chapter! This fic is really really good!
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 6
Its okay Tommy. Jason won't let anyone hurt you.
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 5
Very good realization scene.

Poor Tommy.
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 4
OH MY GOD!! I'LL KILL THOSE BASTARDS!!
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 3
This is not good.
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 2
Jason you idiot! You two are made for each other.

OH NO!
Aisho Ren
2007-11-17 . chapter 1
Oh poor Tommy. From the title I can guess that Jason's reaction won't be positive.
Obscure Internet Reference
2007-11-14 . chapter 1
Keep going!
bhotanni
2007-10-28 . chapter 2
Yes, the more I read this, it's definitely the same exact plot with the same exact characters from Baby Kitty's Ordinary posted on this site.

Did you get permission from her to do a re-write?
bhotanni
2007-10-28 . chapter 1
This story seems very similar to

Even Original Character names are the same as well as the rolls they perform.

Was this coincidence?
Strictly-Original
2007-10-24 . chapter 6
Please write more to this story thanks. Poor Tommy
Van
2007-10-17 . chapter 6
Ubber Great! all i could scream this chapter and the last was NO TOMMY! LOL cant wait to see what you do next :)
Lady-of-the-gray
2007-10-13 . chapter 6
Awesome story! And for a suggestion maybe have the next chapter be Tommy telling everyone what happened? And there would have to be some major fluff invovled of course.
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