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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseHey, just found this and I really liked it.. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff... JENNIFER |
| kokiri fairy 2007-05-10 ch 1, | abusewow great work! loved reading this |
| Spontaneity 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseAWW!! Good! |
| Salean 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseAw wow, this was so good! You just gotta love Danny and Lindsay... so sweet... Really well written although the POVs got a bit confusing. |
| ReJo 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is very good! |
| Farhi 2007-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI declare this post 318 canon. Lol, Seriously though, this is brilliant, especially this line: It’s astounding – he’s 20 miles from home, I’m ten years in the past, yet we’ve met in the middle. |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuseoh! both sides of the story and a kiss :) thanks it was really sweet |
| JK 2007-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is so good |
| CSI3Lyra 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseOkay... a bit of a what the hell? Sweet, but you didn't really separate out the different perspectives enough, and it just got a bit confusing and smooshed. |
| The Little Corinthian 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseUn-betaed or not, this is awesome! :0P Very nice job!! |
| A 2007-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like your description of the scenes, especially when paired with such minimal dialogue. Also, I laughed aloud at "Moo." HEE. Good work. :) |
| rhrforever 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseAw that was adorable. I like the title with the state mottoes for NY and Montana. And the ending, I wish that had happened in the show, it seems like exactly what would too, with the "Moo". |
| SallyJetson 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseGod I love writing like this, poetic, flowing, in the moment, don't lift your head from the screen until you hit the end! Great, Great job. I love the alternating viewpoints and I particularly loved this line. It’s astounding – he’s 20 miles from home, I’m ten years in the past, yet we’ve met in the middle. and this line And goddammit, if reporters aren’t the bane of society. LOL! |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseCute. "Moo", aw, classic! Loved it! When those reporters broke them up at the end of 3.18, I literally jumped up from the floor and yelled at them. (You know you're obsessed with CSI:NY when...) |
| Yemam2422 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the best post episode 18 stories I've read - it was really great! "It’s astounding – he’s 20 miles from home, I’m ten years in the past, yet we’ve met in the middle." That line was just brilliant. I enjoyed seeing your take on the time between Lindsay's testimony and the verdict. I love how they still didn't say anything while they were getting coffee and that the first/only word we heard either of them say was "moo". It was funny and light - just like the season 2 D/L. Really sweet, great story. |