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bunn2007
2008-07-19
ch 32,
abuselong time, no update! saddness. so what the hell just happened there? lol. did he kill them all or something? will piper anne kill herself in piper's body so that no one wil remember this reality? i wonder then where time would theoretically start again and if the same things will pertpetually happen in circles? i mean--what now? please update soon this time! i missed this story. ^^
d
2008-07-14
ch 32, anon.
abuseyou updated! so sad that chris cant be "saved" from his fate. anyways cant wait to read your next update.
gabrieldarke
2008-07-14
ch 32,
abusewhat the heck was that??... dont get me wrong... a great chappie!!... its just that im all so confused now... lol... update soon!!.. later!!
charmedtomeetyou
2008-07-14
ch 32,
abuseso glad you updated! :D great chapter :D
Renavatio
2008-07-13
ch 32,
abuseKewl!
Poisoned Princess
2008-07-13
ch 32,
abuseOkay... I'm way beyond confused.

In one timeline, Chris and Courtney live happily ever after. In another the witch hunts are started all over and Chris is burned at the stake. In another, he dies and becomes the Keeper, and all the kids are left scrambling to keep up.

I don't get it.

-Princess-
holabitches100
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseOMFG! update one of your fing stories. its been like a month. this not cool.
holabitches100
2008-06-27
ch 31,
abusehey its been like a month and a half. please update soon.
crazyDFFgang
2008-06-02
ch 31,
abuseWow... Sorry for the late review, I was horribly busy and now I'm trying to catch up with everything...
I like this... a lot actually. Especially the scene in the past. I wonder how long Piper Anne will be able to play this game. And this Future-or-whatever-Chris is really a good thing, too. Very well picture of character you gave us there... Nice work! Now I just hope you'll update soon!
(Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang)
Rock Chalk
2008-05-16
ch 31,
abuseHm...the plot thickens so to speak.

I'm guessing that "difficult" is somewhat of an understatement in how Chris has dealt with becoming the true Keeper of Times and being separated from his family, or at the least from being able to see them again.

Random thought, if it's Chris' calling to change things as he sees fit, then what business is it of the Powers to tell him how to do/fix things? Wouldn't he be the best entity (for lack of a better word) for knowing how best to keep time on track? Meddling Elders (not a real big Elder fan over here) :)

I found Chris', the Keeper of Times Chris', response about how he may perhaps be "Chris" again. Does he maybe have a plan up his sleeve for un-making himself the Keeper of Times so that he won't have an un-timely demise/separation from his family? :) (By the way, please don't hesitate to tell me to read and find out the answers to any questions I should ask.)

I liked the ending. Of course, though, I can't help but ask that it be updated soon so that we can find out what the plan is for making everything work out.

Great chapter! Until the next update...
Sparkling Cherries
2008-05-16
ch 31,
abusethat image of chris being blank and not remembering wyatt seemed to unnerve me so good work! it actually made me feel ill at ease.

update hun when you can x
future Halliwell
2008-05-14
ch 31,
abuselove it. can't wait for next chapter
lexi-charmed
2008-05-14
ch 31,
abuseIntereting way for the story to go. It's all gettin complicated now, but I like it, so much drama to the story.
I'm now waiting to see how poor little Preston will cope and whether they can change other things, even if they're not supposed to save Chris.
Take your time with updating, I understand, this time of year can be hell.
gabrieldarke
2008-05-14
ch 31,
abuseoh yay you updated!!... cool chappie!!... update as soon as you can!! later!!
scme
2008-05-14
ch 31,
abuseooh great chapter, some proper explanations at last! and now meeting future chris yay! though things seem a bit rubbish for him, im hoping that will change yeah? please update soon!
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