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| o0quille0o 2008-06-30 ch 11,  | abuseThanks for giving us something to read when there is nothing better to do. I really like the way you describe feelings and thoughts. The story is developping slowly, but it does make some sens, even if you did not start on a clear plot line. Keep going! |
| yllom21 2008-03-09 ch 11, | abuseVery interesting story. It got a bit depressing near the end, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Good job so far! |
| Rianne - ennaiR 2008-01-21 ch 11, | abuseAwesome. ^^ Love it. |
| oztan 2008-01-12 ch 11, | abuseNaruto will never be the same. I won't be surprise Naruto will not like Kari to go near him (for now). |
| Harue Harlequin 2007-12-23 ch 11, | abuseAwesome. Gonna update soon? |
| psychocitten 2007-08-07 ch 11, | abuseWhen I read this story it pulled me in making me feel the conection that Gaara and Naruto had. Naruto wanting to have children was also tangeble and when the counsile said he couldn't I felt anger along with him. The story wasn't just some sappy lovy dovy crap, happy ending. It made me feel and showed how life can just give you crap and there is nothing you can do about it. I cried for, my god I don't know, a good 5 minutes when Kari was attacked by Naruto. I can't wait until the next one or when the next ones to your other stories come out. I love reading them. You are a great writer!! |
| Ehwinn 2007-07-23 ch 11, | abuseAh, it's as good as ever! Every chapter!! You made a really good job here (again)!! I like the way it's going on, and I can't wait to know what's going to happen ! |
| Bella216 2007-06-21 ch 11, | abuseT_T...that wz such a good fic...yet so sad> |
| NatureLvrKittz 2007-06-21 ch 11, | abuseVery complicated but nice |
| Vinillii 2007-06-20 ch 11, | abuse... ;~; I wish this wasn't just a drabble series. D: |
| storynerd 2007-06-17 ch 11, | abusei LOVE this story. update soon! |
| Teioke Sheay 2007-06-17 ch 11, | abusethat was sad.. just like last chap.. (just my opinion but you make sasuke sound too strong like he's better than Naruto.. unless that's what you were aiming for..?) update soon! ~TS~ later |
| Ripuku 2007-06-17 ch 11, | abuseaw...poor Naru-chan!! Come home safe!! btw, good luck with the story judging!! X3 |
| Perfumey 2007-06-17 ch 11, | abuseaw poor Naruto :( I hope he's okay update soon ^_^ |
| HanChan 2007-06-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh, that was sad, but still a very good story like all these other linked one-shots. |