I LOVES this series. I love your version of this series.

On a scale of rasperry to epic! I give it an amazing wonderfulness. That's just below epicness!.

Lol, awesome story! _

I'm gonna read the sequels... NOW!

lol on the dirty work refrence

U mixed u spreg's name and got his son greps name

Great story! It was really funny and I love the epilogue!

say how billy and mandy fell in love !

and thier kids should have an envanture where they go to the underworld by them selfs by stealing grims saith to go look for pumkin jack but get lost and met all the monster caracters from the show (like fred fred burger or dracula) and because they don't know how to use the saith all besides telloporting back and forth in the uder world they have an aventure of a life time.

but the two are lost for days and billy and mandy start to worry and look everywhere for them and when they find out their kids went to the under wrold billy, mandy and grim are on a rescue mitsion to find their kids but they have to figure out how to get to the under world without the saith.

and the reason billy's kids went to find jack is beacuse he's the master of pranks and learn everything about how to do pranks.

man i love this story!

Your Billy and Mandy stories are so funny! I started with The Grim Wedding and it was hilarious.

Oh, I like it! I like how everyone has grown up a little, but haven't really changed too much. And the kids. Mama's boy and daddy's little girl.

And, for a future chapter, I like Father Jack's idea. You never see enough of Jeff in fan media.

I LOVED THIS STORY! AND THE ENDING WAS GREAT!

write more stuff soon!

This is so good..I love the part where Mandy says

“You’re getting a vasectomy now,”

It's awesome!

LOVE IT!

I'm quite enjoying this! Good work.

Here's an idea: Jeff returns and is jealous of Billy's "real" kids. Hilarity ensues!

I'm afraid I wasn't too impressed with your charactorization of Mindy. It's a great match to what she was like when she was ten, but she isn't supposed to be ten any more. Adults do go around calling people losers.

They don't say, "I mean, my house IS bigger than yours, loser!" They might say, "Come in Mandy, let me give you a tour of my house. I'm not sure if we'll have time to see it all."

Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

"Grim nodded and used his scythe to turn the house into a giant monstrous frog. It hopped away.

“That was weird,” Billy said, stunned.

“I know,” Grim said, looking at his scythe. “I coulda sworn I put dis ting on ‘Smoldering Ash’.”

Hehehehe. *Wipes away tear*

That was funny. The possibilities are endless when it comes to Grim's scythe.

Aw, Mandy and Scott's interactions are cute. Must be very akward to have two family members that are close to one another both be so...cynical and evil.

I also liked the interlude back to when Mandy was a child. She certainly was bent on global domination, eh?

Keep it up,

-KKBS

Heh, another funny chapter. I like the descriptions you've got going here, particularily Scott's. There's a very detailed image in my mind of a blonde kid with a stare that could slice through wood. Really. That is the sign of good writing. :)

I too am interested in seeing how the children treat Grim. No doubt as bad or worse than their parents did. But you could prove me wrong. It's never a bad thing to twist and turn outside the box...

As a wrap up, I very much enjoyed this piece. I eagerly await the next.

No worries,

-KKBS

I like the detail of discribing Scott and Penelope's outfits, and you've done a good job so far of making a Billy-like girl, when I wasn't sure it could be done. It's still hard to visulize a girl with a Billy-like nose (Blandy doesn't count).

I'm interested to read how Billy and Mandy make money and how the kids view Grim as a parental figure.