dude i want to update NOW WRTIE NOW OR I WILL GO WHERE U LIVE AND KICK UR BUTT INTO GEAR happy now i have reviewed and im waiting for the next chapter and the sequel to frostbite so get ur butt in gear and start writing and updating

I'm sorry I fell off the radar, but school has been eating my life. So, I re-read this story, and am going to re-read the parts of the sequel before continuing.

Anyway, ouch. That has to hurt. He already had self-esteem issues as it was.

Okay, just finished reading this story, and I have to say, it. Is. AWESOME! I really loved the ending. So, yeah. Great job!

Okay, this is the first real negative thing you'll ever hear from me. I really don't like what you did here. Danny' parents would NOT do that or say those things. Just wanted to put that in there. It was brilliant, very well done, but I don't like the fact tjhat it happened...DONT HATE ME!

I'm just going to say teehe because it's awesome!

I luffles Obsidian! SHE ROCKS!

I love this story so much! GLOMPS FOR KAZI! Obsidian's little speech actually made me cry...CURSE YOU! Not really, it's good stuffs. Keep up the good work kazi

Teehee.

You are so sadistic kazi! Poor danny is going to need therapy until he's 187 million years old!

Poor danneh...

Teehee. I like deh story!

CURSE THE SHORTNESS! I know I have less than no room to talk, but that's not the point! Still good though!

I LUFFLES IT! I can't wait to get to the rest!

wewt! I luffles it! I look forward to reading the rest of it!

sibling moments make me happy. I'm having fun reading this especially since I usually don't read these kind of fanfics. I like your literary style