i liked ur story and i hope u make a new one

I really like this fic! It's so fluffy and adorable :D. My only critique would be to describe your OCs a bit more as there are a lot of them here. It would add a nice touch, that's all I'm saying ;)

Good update. I liked how Jin asked Hyun-Jin for a date. Was cute.

Update soon k?

Awesome story:) Continue updating please!

yay!! finally this one was cute too, update soon!!

“Hyun Jin, dear, please don’t do that. You’re going to suffocate yourself.” Rae Jin immediately threw my fluffy pillow across the room. - LOL. LOL. LOL. LOL.

Good update, but I think you need to give it a bigger plot element as opposed to two guys chasing after Hyun Jin. It could become redundant soon if you don't do something about it and what not. This isn't a flame or whatever, this is just a heads up, k?

Take care.

OMG! I LOVE UR STORY PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON! I CANT WAIT TIL NEXT CHAPTER!

hm i can't decide between Jin and Hwoarang. But that date was cute.

Nice update. Things are crusing along nicely. Can't wait for the next one :D

I like it so far, update soon please!

This is a good story, keep writing

“I swear, Hwoarang, you’re stalking me.” - lol!

Aw. Jin taking care of her when she had the flu. Cute, cute, all cute.

Loving this story. Update again soon!

Nice update.

I looked at your profile page and got really excited; HMONG POWER! Haha. Nyob zoo to you too. I'm Hmong as well, obviously. *looks at homepage link* And you're a Moua I see. I've been on this site for almost three years and you're the first Hmong person I know in the Tekken section. Usually, when I tell fellow authors I'm Hmong they're just like, "What's that?" Psh.

ANYWAYS. Your story. I like your style. It's simple, but to the point. I'm not really into OC's, (original characters) but I'm interested in where you'll take this. Can't wait for Hwoarang to enter the picture too. Gotta love that Korean. Too bad he's fake. Anways, keep writing.