Nice update.

I looked at your profile page and got really excited; HMONG POWER! Haha. Nyob zoo to you too. I'm Hmong as well, obviously. *looks at homepage link* And you're a Moua I see. I've been on this site for almost three years and you're the first Hmong person I know in the Tekken section. Usually, when I tell fellow authors I'm Hmong they're just like, "What's that?" Psh.

ANYWAYS. Your story. I like your style. It's simple, but to the point. I'm not really into OC's, (original characters) but I'm interested in where you'll take this. Can't wait for Hwoarang to enter the picture too. Gotta love that Korean. Too bad he's fake. Anways, keep writing.

This is pretty interesting. Keep going.

I dont see why you didnt get reviews for this story! its very good nonetheless!