This is great! I can't wait to read more!

Squee~!

That was so insanely cute!!

I have to thank you for writing this, it made me really happy. :3

I've been waiting to read (or write) something like this for a while now. ^^

Heehee.

OH.MY.GOSH.

Finally!
The whole time while I was playing Origins this is what I was thinking about.
Gibari and Ladekahn so obviously loved each other!
And Giacomo definately had a thing for Sagi. =P

I'm so glad you wrote this!
(And wrote it well, too.)

GibarixLadekahn is one of my favorite pairings EVER, since playing Origins and seeing them together. I LOVE THIS FANFIC. -melt- They're so perfect together, and you write them so well. ;~; I'd love more, 'cause there's no such thing as too much GibxKahn.

Also, I LOVE when Palolo hinted at Giacomo liking Sagi, I lol'd. And then promptly squeed when he mentioned that Gib and Kahn loved each other and didn't know it yet.

wow... this was so great. and very sexy

This is by far one of the smexiest stories I have ever read. And I don't even really like Gibari that much, but this story was fantastic! You, my friend, are a genius.

Actually, you inspired my story "Desire" with that comment Palolo made about Sagi and Giacomo. Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you!

i really loved this fic but there is one thing that i have to mention:
"I caught his waste before he could fall and pushed further into his mouth"

NICE TYPO!
i never would have noticed this had u not pointed it out when we were at ur house.
lmmfao.


but seriously it was a really well written fic and i am very proud of joo...have a cookie :)

...
OMG. Mar, it's beautiul! before you posted i thought it woud be funny like your other fics, but now i'm realy glad it isn't. i shall fangirl upon this lovely fiction for many melenia to come. and... GIBARI! squee!
i did have a bit of dificulty with the ages though... two or three times it was all "wait, he's how old now?" *takes out calculator* "nineteen. wait... twenty-two?"
anyway, very nice. it makes me happy.

"I caught his waste before he could fall"


SJHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHAHHAH
WAIST
IS WHAT YOU MEANT.

'Cause if it wasn't then that'd be one... scary scene.

AHAHAHAHA

MATINLAWL WHERE DID YOU LEANR ABOUT GAY SEX??