I'm predicting that either
Sinister cates Kitty,
Kitty's Powers suddenly work again and she gets out
Or she see's "Lance" and it turns out to be Mystique.
Anyway, can't wait for an update.

when are u going to type 18 up because these stories are so good i been reading alot of these and ur is the best but dont make the sentes to loge but hurry up and make 18

im curious as to what will happen with scott :D

Oh yeah and i was also wandering what is mystique actually doing? Will all that be revealed in chapter 18?

Hey, i just wanted to say that this stuff is great! You've really captured the essence of the x-men evo series and it's almost as though i'm watching an actual episode :) you're a really talanted writer.
I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 18 and hope that you continue to write more because this is amazing! :D

I like it so far! There are things I'm just happy about: I love the X-men teaming up with the Brotherhood, it is always such a fun with a lot of potential, and they are so funny together.
You capture the situation between Kitty and Lance perfectly. I really like the way you write about them, with all the silence and nervousness, their inner thoughts and doubts. The best part is in the restaurant when Lance is feeling depressed by the lack of money and Kitty trying to build a conversation. Simply great. I think you were kinda true to their characters. Way to go.
And weird as it is, and though I love Romy, I'm for some reason fine with Rogue/Pietro. Maybe because your Pietro isnt that annoying brat as he is in the show, only a lovable yahoo that I enjoy reading.

So keep it up^^

good chapter, I can't wait to see how this all comes to a close and then what they do with the rest of their day.
Will everyone still try to get Lance and Kitty together? (say yes please!) well here's to wishful thoughts I guess. update soon!

YES! you finally got 17 up! good grief girl, what do I need to do come over there and hit you with your journal? - just kidding.

So the blonde girl has to be Emma Frost, and if not, you are playing with my head in the most evil way. I have no clue about the guys though, but knowing you they are probably characters from the academy x/childhood's end series. Surprised you don't have Surge in here somewhere, or Icarus. NEways - great chapter, you set it all up for some major action for all parties and each part flowed really nicely, though next time make the heart to heart moments much shorter - I liked it this time, but next time just think about it.
Lance is finally awake! how many chapters did that take?! the Todd and Jubilee stuff is cool and creepy, and would I be wrong in guessing they are under the construction yard?- just my theory.
Please update soon! ^_^ see you Monday!

love it

intersting chapter :] update soon.

Sigh. No acolytes. Story seems interesting.

love this story - I hope you update soon because I want to find out what happens next. Your Sinister is very well done, he has a haunting presence that I love about him. I just wish I could figure out what he planning.

nice chapter :]
yeah i know wat u mean, school is so hectic, i dont even have time to work on my stories anymore..lol. update soon!

i hope u get better hon im a really big fan of this story

i hope u get better