*Squeals* PLEASE update this soon! I. Adore. This. Story. I was secretly hopionog for Loz and Yazoo to come back too...please please please finish this...its too good to leave abandon. I would cry.

Yay. Insert happy dance here -

And yay, Sephiroth is awake! We love Sephiroth. He's so evil. :D

I wonder if Livia is still 'awake' inside Sephiroth's head... hm..

Waiting for the next chapter is going to kill me. Ta. ;) lol

Please say that they get to go back to Gaia!

Such a sad chapter! But good none the less.

Must admit that I'm partial to chocolate pudding myself! _

Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work :)

OMG I...LOVE this story.

:D

I can't wait to continue reading this!

Beautiful chapter. :)

I have the same problem with my stories-the inspiration comes and then its lost once a few sentences are written down.

But it's good to see you haven't lost your touch for interesting stories. I can't wait to see what happens to everyone; Bryan should be shot and bricked. 3

Update soon!

Hello! I found this story from clicking another story of yours and then browsing your profile.

I love it It always makes me happy when I find an OC story that's really good, and by my definitions, your story is really good! I read straight through to chapter 36 in a day. Maybe I shouldn't have done that... @_@ Kadaj is really well written. I also think Bryan is and idiot and needs to be punished!

And I'm sticking with the story 'till you finish it, just so you know XD Keep Writing!

Nu, there's no more to read! AH! Hmm... I still loved it. Laura comforted the two brothers quite nicely. I wanna draww... And you haven't updated in two years. Dang... Are you gonna come back to it? Or did you move to another site? You're an amazing writer, and you should finish this! Now I wanna play DoC so I can fully understand everything... But I wanna go draw pregnant Zack. Cuz it's hilarious. You're a genius D

Dude... a pregnant ZACK? HOLEY CRAP! I think... I want to draw this. The nasty green sludge incident, I'll call it. I love you for this. It shows that Zack wasn't so innocent after all D Totally random Hojo-ness, but I love it. I love the way you explained her inability to have kids, too. Genius. I was stumped D

I frucking love Zack! Yup, that's my word, too. First of all, I love that he can read minds. That "Damn straight" was awesome. I almost squealed that time. Second, he's smart, and modest D Man... Anyway, Azami is brutal. I wanna punch her for doing that. I hope she does get punched D

Okay, first of all, sorry for not reviewing every single chapter P This story is AWESOME! I didn't really like your OC at the beginning (I was jealous in every way possible...), but she's cool now. Never was a fan of Kadaj, either. But it's great. Yes, it is. One thing in this particular chapter I HAD to tell you though... When Zack mentioned his "badass lifestream powers," I squealed. Out loud, for the whole house to hear. And I never squeal. I can't help it, I love Zack T_T And you brought him BACK! I freaking LOVE that idea, of both him and Aerith watching over both Gaia and Earth, and why not every other planet? I mean, if they're nowhere near each other, can they see other planets besides those two? Anyway, I can't wait to see what Laura does to Bryan's face. Not to mention I'm looking forward to Zacky-goodness, and I wanna see what Olivia does! Does she fight? Only one way to find out P

I LOVE how laura mentions a ton of stuff from FFVII D 'Tis fun to think about it.

holy crap this is so awesome...and wow the sexual talk is intense

This is really good! It's a little fast paced in the beginning, but you've fixed it later on. Please update! It's really good!

MiMi