The dialogue was confusing, but the feel of the fic was good. You used (it's) instead of (its) though.

Finessefully,

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Oh my word, Farla, you've done it again. You're easily the best, most talented author I've seen on this site, not to mention my favorite. This is one of your best fics ever, right up there with "Weak", which, I'll have you know, is on my favorites list. I can totally imagine Meowth acting that way. Well, keep writing! Whatever you write I'll read!

this was an awkward fic and kinda sad. death to Team Roacket!

I read this before, but its funny how confused I can get after taking these eyedrop things. I went to the orthadonists and I got eye drops so I can't fucuss as well, I can barely read. It will wear off, but I'm impatient. Apperently it makes me cunfuzzled too, bacause I only understood the very main details of the story. - Lol...

-Faith's Fantasy

I don't really think what they do to the slowpoke is that bad, it's not like they kill the slowpoke for it like they did to the cubone. The slowpoke tails grow back too, and it's not like they're wild slowpoke either, they were slowpoke of the people of the town. The slowpoke didn't need their tails for anything, we do the same thing to birds anyway, for feather pillows when cotton could easily be used. Oh well, just moinky's opinion and puffeta to all of you!

Awww, poor Meowths. ;_; Good fic

Wow. Three word review: Moving, Touching, Powerful. I like it. A lot. I'd like to see more from you on Meowth-kun :D

Maybe this is a bad timne for me to mention I love Team Rocket... Well, the anime ones anyway. The organisation is pretty nasty. Very good musing on Meowth. I think the reason he doesn't act like this normally is because he just doesn't THINK about it. Jessie and James neither; they aren't intentionally cruel to Pokemon or ever think exactly WHAT the boss will do to the ones the give him; they'd be quite horrified by something like this. But I still like 'em better than Ash. _

The idea that humans invented greed is a self centered one, pokemon know what greed is, and we've seen pokemon embrace it (Moweth, the Mercrow trio).

Meowth is not a pokemon, he's not human either, neither are Jessie and James,

"I'm part of Team Rocket first second last and always."

blame TR, not humanity.

Meowth probably would act like that...

About what you say about team rocket being evil, that is true in gameboy for sure but on TV they dont do many serious things. Too bad, there should be a bit of violence in the cartoon.

Jessie and James are the execption to Team Rocket. If you dig deep into their history,they not as bad as ash makes them be

Ooh...I loved it! Then again, not that you've ever written anything I DIDN'T like...

Now that last part I agree with!

Aw! That's sad :( *sobs* Poor Meowth, poor Slowpoke.. Poor Cubones! *bursts into tears*

Yup. The killed Cubones and poor Slowpokes... Ouch... Good story!

Er, I have to say it... "Team Rocket isn't all that bad". At least not the three we generally see on the show - it's rather obvious that they don't cut it as thieves, mostly because they're way too nice. Anybody truly evil (heck, even marginally evil) would have shot Ash in the head and taken Pikachu by the third episode. Jesse, James, and Meowth even refused to fight alongside their Boss during the Mewtwo TV special, because they didn't want to do something that they felt was wrong.

Anyway, I liked the fic despite this. It has to hurt for Meowth to do what he does, regardless of whether he is or isn't truly "evil". I don't think he is - to me it's been amply demonstrated that J, J, and M are being used by TR as much as any of their victims are. In the Johto episodes, they never have enough food to be eating right, and with all their comments about debt, they seem to owe their souls to the Team Rocket store. Personally, I'd say that the Rocket organization itself is evil, but that Jesse, James, and Meowth are not. Still, your characterization of Meowth works well either way, and was very good.

A fine fic indeed... keep it up!