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| ChocoBetty 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm smiling. I thought about this pairing while watching the episode but I would have never come up with anything similar to this. Actually I'm still having some trouble to find a way to write about Sheldon. You did a great job. (Although at my "The Sims 2" game Don and Sheldon are a couple for... Well, some time.) Thanks for having this nice story as a bed time story! |
| bubble-rouge08 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuse2 hot men = check. danny/flack angst = check. sheldon's backstory = check. don's backstory = check. love it! ... so what if Danny comes back to Don? :D |
| Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseNo Don/Danny? OMG! This was good but Don/Danny rules its my favourite pairing not so pleased with whats goin on in canon at the moment. more Don/Danny please Although Hawkes Don was gud! In fact very gud! |
| LaneIA 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI'm not much into slash, but this was beautifully written. The depth you've given to the characters was wonderful. I really felt that this glimpse into their inner-thoughts was one of the best written scenes I have read in a long time. Thanks for sharing it. LaneIA |
| singingstarryknights 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS BEAUTIFUL. it's beautiful, and in character, and believable, and I truly loved it. (don't listen to the homophobic creeps... they don't recognize talented writing.) I loved this scene in 3x18, and I love the spin you've put on it. I've never read a HawkesFlack piece before, but no I feel like if I ever found another, I would judge it against the quality of this one. I loved it so much, it was sweet, and caring, and loving, and hot, and sexy, and comfortable, and real. Simply beautiful. I loved the coining of your phrases, the wording and the structure of the story was very poetic, and it flowed from one intimate moment to another easily, and I loved it. You've portrayed each character in a completely different light than what we see on the show, and while doing that, remained true to the characters in their canon personalities, which is really difficult to do, and you've done it wonderfully. Thank you for writing this. It was smart, and witty, and real, and I loved every word. |
| ew 2007-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is gross they are not gay sicko |
| Velvetine 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseoy oy oy, i loved it. i've never read a falck/hawkes before but this was sweet and sexy in all the right places. you created an interesting backstory for both characters and the way they talked about them. the dialogue was great and hawkes was so in character that it was incredible. anyhoo, that was refreshing and i hope you write more of this pairing. :D |
| E4 Blonde 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it, I love it, I love it!! I'm grinning from ear to ear, in fact my boss just asked me what i'm looking so happy about. Its a pairing that i have thoguth for a while needed exploring and you hit just the right note. Poor Flack, you forget that he is the baby of the group sometimes its great that you explored that. Bless him! the way you portrayed Hawkes was great, he needs some character development (on the show) but you ran with that and it works so well. I enjoyed the fact that the relationship is different for Flack with Hawkes than it was with Danny. Thank you! |