I've noticed the resemblence to, how strange i never thought of it this way. Nice job and keep up the good work!

It's possible. Good job on it.

i like it a lot!it s very intresting.well i was hoping that it'll be more romantic...and with a happy end:P...but i love it!

It's very well written and the vizual impact is has is awsome, i could even see the colors comming out of the words:P...the Astarothe and Ion...a surprise, but was expecting...they look too much alike:P
Waiting for more Trinity Blood fanfics from you:)

You kind of lost me there at the end. Are you implying that Ion is Astarothe's son? Brother? Clearly I'm confused. But, despite the fact that I can't grasp theories, I liked this alot. Very well written XD