FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Omega 64 2007-06-01 ch 1,  | abuseAmazing story. Wish I could find more ShinjiRei like this. Omega |
| Dark-Magician-41 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseLOVE THIS STORY! Espacialy the songs you choose for it, but what happened to the MP Evas? |
| ReisFriend 2007-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOh Wow! Now this was really nice. Shinji get's to be the Angel and Rei became his when they were drawn to each other. And Asuka too. And Gendo got his arse whacked. And Kaworu, well I never liked the guy anyway was sliced in pieces. Nice story, really nice. Keep up the good work and update the Isle of Behemoth. |
| The War General 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseTHAT KICKED **! |
| Deathblade Prime 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThe battle between Adam and Tabris resembles the battle between The Emperor of humanity, who constantly fought defensivily, and Warmaster Horus in Warhammer 40k. |
| Calbob 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice work. This was a great idea for a story. Very imaginative. |
| Vampwriter 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseVery not bad. So what's up for the next fic update? |
| gunman 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseDAMN! THAT ROCKED! Granted you could have made this into three or even four chapters but a one-shot story is fun to read as well. I like the fact that Shinji and Rei got together, are married and are having a child. I like the fact that Asuka is part of their family and much nicer to everyone. Especially Shinji and Rei. I like the fact that Gendo and SEELE got what they deserved. Though a little more detail about their punishment could have been given. I like the fact that Ritsuko was able to get her revenge, though not in the way that she wanted, and was able to find her own happiness, being married with a child. And I loved the battle between Shinji and Kaworu, or Adam and Tabris. And it does leave open one question: if Adam, Lilith and Ariel are inside Shinji, Rei and Asuka, couldn't the other Angels also be merged with humans? It's an idea if anything. Still, this story rocked! Good work and I hope to see more in the future! Write on! |
| Alucard180 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abusevery nice ending, |
| dennisud 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad little ditty for a quiet night's read. Now if this could be expanded for a 8 or 10 chapter saga? dennisud |
| Fifth Horseman 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseGood job on this. My only piddling little complaint is that I wish it was a little longer. Good stuff. |
| clope023 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abusewell this was interesting and original to say the least, good show! |
| Neferius 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI feels like a long time since I read the first chapter...it kind of was but the wait was worth it. The Adam vs Tabris battle was nice and the over all feel was...well...you. I can't explain that so don't make me. A nice ending...once again one of your trademarks. If you do decide to continue this I could see a few things happening. 1. The hunt for Seele. 2. The pilots actually interacting with their freinds after these events. 3. Well thats all I can think of at the moment but theres more. Well thats IF you continue. Anyway, this story was overall enjoyable. Time well spent. I have one last thing to say to you Shinji-senpai...one more down and whole lot more to go. Read ya Later. |
| Lantz Blades 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abusethat was kinda cool but sad at the same time ya kno you should definatly continue this piece maybe with Kaworu returning or something |