 TheWinchesterAngel 2008-12-07 . chapter 7PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 ohlivtree 2008-10-30 . chapter 7this is great. please write more. |
 Bubble Rao 2008-06-11 . chapter 5i'm hooked
literally
you are an AMAZING writer |
 Jonnie 2008-04-26 . chapter 3 I don't know if you already have the answer about young vampires but in the twilight stories they're called "newborns" |
 in-death-we-live 2008-04-25 . chapter 4you should kepp wrighting the story!! i m eqn i get so mad when someone stopa wrighting a great story and just leaves it be!! but i love your story and you need to keep wrighting or im going to gat very, very mad!! update soon please!!
pease:O |
 in-death-we-live 2008-04-09 . chapter 5love the whole story so far but i realy like the edwars vs. u thing at the end of cap. 5. so funny |
 Angelina 'Fringe' Johnson 2008-03-10 . chapter 5U just HAVE 2 wright some more! Im just DIEING 2 know wat happens next! |
 savageheart 2008-02-29 . chapter 5Oh wow! Finally! Yay! |
 topazstar22 2008-02-29 . chapter 5Great! update fast! |
 Bella-Marie-Black 2008-01-18 . chapter 4I like this story. |
 hyper active pixie 2007-11-25 . chapter 4I love it! Hurry and update! |
 savageheart 2007-10-09 . chapter 4aw. did you stop with this story? it was good. |
 vamp-wolf-lover 2007-10-05 . chapter 4you, update, now...please? |
 stupid-unrealiable-vampire 2007-09-01 . chapter 4i like it, update soon, ya rock ;) |
 amrawo 2007-08-14 . chapter 4great story so far! i like it! update soon! |