Pls write more

This was fairly well written. It is interesting reading from Sesshoumaru's pov

well come on girl update with the GOOD STUFF

Dun Dun Dun it was... it was... BEAUTIFUL aw it was soo sweet and loving. Rin is so understanding in this story and Shessomaru is... loving, caring and undoubtably devoted to her it's sweet I love it. nothing was wroung with this story it was beautiful and the spelling was perfect.
Thank you

From: MIB

Amazing Rin and Sess. Sess is so protective and jealous.
~siriushermionelover

ooh pls make the next chappy soon! this si so cute!

good story.i look forward to the rest

i like it

hey omg thank you!i have been wanting to read a little rin and sessomaru fanfic forever!update soon please!

That was quite the chapter. Very deep, emotional, moving. I think these two -Rin and Sesshoumaru- are the most complex, devoted characters to couple.

You portrayed them both wonderfully and I saw no mistakes, your writing is near flawless. Wonderful job! I look forward to the next chapter with much anticipation.

-Kaimei Rose-

Wow! Now this is a good story! I wouldn't even try to do a POV of Sesshomaru. But you pulled it of amazingly! Please write more!

This is lovely! A gilded diamond among the rest of the crap on this site. I love the way you've characterized Sess. The manner of speak is so perfect for his attitude and demeanor; a perfect combination of the old world, pride, honor, and a good bite of cussing anger. I also like that you didn't turn him into a lovesick wuss like most people do. Even in love I doubt Sesshoumaru would be a gushing fool. I could go on and on about the different points, but I'll sum it up with this:

WRITE MORE! ^o^

That was great! Luved it! Not many are up to the task of getting into Sesshomaru's head, and you did a fine job. Update soon! :)

You sould keep going, I like this story.

when are you going to post them?