I like this ending better.

i once read a story only three chapters long

i wished that this was a threequel as it originally was because i want to know what happened in between but oh well. you're still a good author and i still love your work.

lol,Bella IS HIS RIDE HOME! good inspirational song, live like you were dying by tim mcgraw

Both your endings shocked me - I knew from early on that Victoria would kill him but I thought he would be vampire. This is good

I like this take on the original story line. I like Andy but there are just so many holes to the story, it was hard to imagine, for me at least. Though, I do like that James didn't attack Bella in your story :)

i love the original ending and i know Andy dies but i really dont like extra people in the cullens lives except the 6 of them. so they move on in the original and i like it better :)

hope this helps and i love this story and the first bit of this 'Just the Summer' :)

beautiful

Your Andy is officially my all time favorite OC. He was sweet and cute and just really really real. I liked the original ending because it was more realistic but it broke my heart because I fell in love with him. Really well written and very believeable.

WOW

Thank you for the alternate ending. The original left me sobbing and may have been the better of the two but the alternate gave me some hope. So can't choose.

They were both good. I will admit that the first one was a much more realistic type ending. Though miracles do happen and the second one could have been a miracle come true. I'm not sure I have a favorite. However I do think the sentimantality if the first ending moved me much more than the happy ending in the second.

That was well done.

I was expecting something like this to happen. But didn't the Cullen's deal with James and Victoria before meeting Bella? It was over Alice if I remember what Edward said. Did Victoria think it was Alice with Edward and that's why she said what she did?

Now Donyel knows he's dying and is willing to share the time he has left. She really does care a lot for him. Interesting graduation pictures. Wonder if Andy's mom suspects he's dying?