Reviews for The Rise of the Fire Booster

Reviews For: The Rise of the Fire Booster

Mike 2007-09-25 ch 11, anon.	abuseWow. Pretty cool! My other thing is... you know Wyldfyr is male, right? He's always been male...
Bonebreaker 2007-07-01 ch 10,	abusehey this better continue, it's getting interesting
Sarah Frost 2007-06-12 ch 9,	abuseI love powerful!Kitt! I like the rage you gave her, though it also seems like she's gone a bit evil; making her powerful is a great tool to destroy the horrible horrible way canon treated her. It's too bad Connor didn't even bother to teach her mag-moves, and it's lovely to see her getting the skills now. (I did an essay on dragon-booster dot livejournal dot com, if you're interested. She's useless for a shocking proportion of the series.) It's very cool to cast the Fire Booster as the most powerful one of them all, and I really wish this was true (I don't think it'll be canon, because red's only one of the five colours). You write fairly well, and you obviously write fast, so both of those are good things. I thought the Determination of the Dragon was a great idea for an original race, using all twelve colours at once, and the Black Ice gear sounds cool. You have good ideas on your own, and so the borrowings from canon such as the Eye of the Dragon race and the falling-into-lava incident seemed out of place to me--either announce AU and rewrite the series or make it up yourself, because there's a disjunction when you try doing both! The Moordryd/Kitt was also extremely sudden; you'd mostly shown them fighting, and there's scarcely an indication they actually know the other as a person. You could have made more efforts to develop the relationship; maybe they didn't have so much of an issue with each other before Artha came along (though of course Moordryd would have resented her being at the top of the points standings) and you could have flashbacked to less adversarial moments, or...well, just generally spent time establishing the relationship and/or rivalry. Anyway, I do like this fic. Kitt completely needs powerups, and good on you for giving them to her. All the best for your writing!
jadeandsugar 2007-05-30 ch 9,	abusePretty drac story! It's about time Kitt got a bit of credit, what with pig headed Artha and stupid whiny little Lance hogging the spotlight... (mutters obscenities) Anyway, I usually don't ship with DB, but there's something strangely appealing about Moordryd/Kitt. Update soon!
daydream53 2007-03-25 ch 9,	abusei like it update soon
D.J. Scales 2007-03-18 ch 9,	abusenice but are you ever going to introduce the league of eight or not.
D.J. Scales 2007-03-17 ch 8,	abuseSo you would think that Artha and Beau would win the race since they have Gold Draconium but it's hard to tell.
D.J. Scales 2007-03-16 ch 7,	abuseAnd the ending is ironic. Is Moordryd ever going to unleash the league of eight or not.
Bedelgese 2007-03-16 ch 7,	abuseYay! M/K fanfiction. Finally some ff about both^^. I like this pairing too, I have some M/K drawings in my deviantart page :).
D.J. Scales 2007-03-15 ch 4,	abuseNow this story is sounding like the dragon booster episode Eye Of The Dragon
strawberymufin 2007-03-14 ch 3,	abuseWow drac story! I kinda think Kitt was too special. Still, I get tired of there not being any stories about Kitt. This is one of the best I've read so far. Keep it up! P.S. You have to update soon. Don't be like those other dragon booster stories that never update! :(
D.J. Scales 2007-03-14 ch 3,	abuseThis sounds like Eye of the Dragon from the hit show Dragon Booster. I suppose that the furox was one of the 8 dragons in th ered draconium empire's league of 8?
Liliwen 2007-03-14 ch 3,	abuseDrac story, and you have a great writing style. I'm waiting for you to update. :P My only problem is that you seem to have made Kitt too powerful and special too fast. Suddenly red draconium is the best, the Fire Booster is more powerful than the Shadow Booster and Kitt suddenly knows how to do mag-moves. Though Passhun probably trained her. Otherwise I like how you're making Kitt discover her own destiny and not hide behind Artha anymore. It's about time she stepped up and took control. Kitt is beginning to sound like evil Moordryd at the end of the third chapter. It'll be incredibly interesting to see what happens.

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