It's me Katie from creative writing!

I've never read anything by Stephen King. I know, sad isn't it? But your stuff kinda makes me wanna go pick up a book of his. I really liked this poem especially the lines:

"Head held high and gun slung low

His presence remains an undying echo"

I don't know why I liked it so much. I guess it was the flow and the rhyme.

Awesome poem! ^-^

Awesome! Really good, I applaud it.

Captures the feeling of the story well.

It seems like you had to grasp for words to rhyme sometimes, but overall, I liked it a lot.